My Four Hatreds -- Fires in the Sky

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Date Posted: 13:45:33 04/10/06 Mon
Author: Hidden Angel Eyes
Subject: My Four Hatreds

The body was still as death.
Scarcely did it breathe in the poison emitting from the plastic tubing.
The blue balloon would deflate but in a panic, fill up once more to its fullest capacity.
It was a painful sight for those half closed eyes.
Those dazed eyes.
My Eyes.

The blood would circulate through the veins of the bodily high way system.
Although the crimson rushed by, no heat came of it.
That body never gave warmth unless the mind began to slip
Fall, crush, bend, twist.
That cursed rage.
My Temper.

Too many pills taken.
Not an overdose but a deadly attack against the mind.
The restless nights drove the sanity away and broke the fragile spirit.
Now no twisted grin would come of it.
No simple smile in the moonlight.
My Smile.

The occasional beeping always broke the settling silence and corrupted the tranquility.
Painful; All movements and sounds disrupted the balance of a simple death.
God knew that body would never die-
Even when those bloodied hands wrapped around the plug�
I have several lives but she tried to kill me forever.
My Enemy.

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[> Re: My Four Hatreds -- Devin, 14:27:31 04/19/06 Wed

I'm not sure what to think of that... I know it's very, very well written, and it speaks loudly, but I'm not sure if I should be feeling sad or afraid. I definitely like it though. :)

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