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Subject: 尋狗啟示


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Date Posted: 20:11:04 04/11/02 Thu

最近我在畫社的旁邊看見一則“尋狗啟示”,內容如下:

本人在三月五日遺失了一頭屬細小型的西施犬,剛剛剷毛,年紀大約5-6歲,但外表是看不出來的。身型十分細小,毛色有啡色、白色、黑色。牙齒鬆脫。他身體有毛病,需定時吃藥。他的名字叫BB。
他不但對本人的家人十分重要,亦是令一隻狗的伴兒。
希望有心人留意或拾獲致電......

我post這張啟示出來不是要大家去尋犬,而是想捉他錯處...

首先,主人說他三月五日遺失了小狗,但至今一個月多才貼poster出來,我相信狗兒已經凶多吉少了。(它還身體有毛病,需定時吃藥。)
另外,這則啟示的內容好像有點問題。
第一句已經說了細小型的西施犬,之後又說身型十分細小,太累贅了。
既然小狗剛剛剷毛,他的毛色又怎會有啡色、白色、黑色呢?
最奇怪的就是末句“亦是令一隻狗的伴兒”,我想應該是“亦是另一隻狗的伴兒”吧!

如果主人是我,我會這樣寫...

本人在三月五日遺失了一隻西施犬,至今已有一個月多,仍未尋回。
他的名字叫BB,身型十分細小,年紀大約5-6歲,剛剛剷毛,原有毛色是啡色、白色及黑色。它的牙齒已經鬆脫,身體有毛病,需定時吃藥。
他不但對本人及家人十分重要,亦是家中另一隻狗的伴兒。

大概是這樣吧! 也寫得不太好。
我未試過遺失寵物,只遺失過心愛的人。

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Re: 尋狗啟示小便便04:02:41 03/17/05 Thu
Re: 尋狗啟示xx05:11:40 04/10/06 Mon
Re: 尋狗啟示xx05:13:35 04/10/06 Mon


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