**********WINNER OF OHW IS DIATOM WITH: "QUINTESSENTIAL YOU"!!!**************** -- AngelOFires ****One Hit Wonder****

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Date Posted: 05:13:17 10/13/01 Sat
Author: AngelOfire
Subject: **********WINNER OF OHW IS DIATOM WITH: "QUINTESSENTIAL YOU"!!!****************

awesome job jim!~~~~
you rocked with this one~~!!!!!!!!
jeeeeezzzzzzz.... alphabetized and everything...
youre such an over-achiever......~~~~!!!
something i strive to be
but i'm too lazy......

love
angel
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Date Posted: 20:04:24 10/11/01 Thu
Author: DIATOM
Subject: Quintessential You
In reply to: AngelOfire 's message, "*******OHW OPEN FOR TONIGHT!!! DEADLINE IS 10:00 PM CST!!!**********" on 20:04:24 10/11/01 Thu

Ok.... took all the requirements... determined my own choices on the extras... alphabetized them: cheating love, demolition, flurry, linked to you, lion, marvel, mind play, question but obey, scavenger, severe burns, Timbuktu, Tootsie Rolls, unbalanced, vacuum, voracious, you are what I am not, and white got forgot about so I threw it in at the end.... here goes:

A single man, I've made my stand,
Been cheatin' love so long,
The demolition of my trust,
Has sparked this little song.

A flurry of involvement with,
Exotic foreign girls,
Was just denial showing me,
Big oysters with small pearls.

My heart was always linked to you,
My lion's habits borne,
In deference to your self defence,
My love you did suborn.

Were you a voodoo princess?
Transmitting E.S.P.?
How were you 'cross the ocean still,
Manipulating me?

I found myself in trances,
Just how I cannot say,
I did not have volition 'cept,
To question and obey.

You were a mindlink vulture,
A scavenger of souls,
Severe burns and abrasions,
Would take a lesser toll.

It mattered not if I was,
In Greece or Timbuktu,
My mind was slaved in uplink,
To quintessential you.

I fought with every tactic,
With books and Tootsie Rolls,
My diet 'came unbalanced,
I ate them by the bowl.

My conscience was a vacuum,
My thoughts replaced with yours,
I finally overloaded,
That's how I shut those doors.

My soul now free of fungus,
Voraciously I fed,
On independent feelings,
Wherever my nose led.

In just about a million ways,
You are what I am not,
Where I am free and liquid,
You are a giant clot.

And yet as I'm here writing,
On paper brilliant white,
I lose my sense of focus,
And dream of you tonight.

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