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Date Posted: 21:11:42 10/21/01 Sun
Author: AngelOfire
Subject: ***WINNER IS CHEYENNE WITH "Satisfaction Awaits Surrender" ****!!!

the OHW winner tonight is:

Cheyenne with "Satisfaction Awaits For Surrender"

congratulations cheyenne!!!
this was overall just outstanding!
very imaginative yet smooth and natural how you worked in all those 'quirky' little words and phrases i assigned!!! this was a TOUGHIE!!!!!!

you did great.

you had some very stiff competition i'll tell ya!!! so it was a tough choice!!

well done!!

folks, thank all of you for entering!!! watch for the next one!!!

love
angelofire
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below is cheyenne's poem:

In the premiere of our love
We mixed business and pleasure
And painfully exposed my scars
That were once my wound from too much love
I strived to keep covered up
Until you stripped me bare

Twin emotion love and hate
An S.O.S. to my heart
You were a wizard with blueprints to my insecurities
Raping my soul and numbing my body
Like I was struck by lightening

With simple words and clever haikus
You unraveled me in the almandite sunset
You spoke like a poet and whispered over my skin
You tasted of danger and sandalwood spiked the air
Laughter bubbled up inside of me like champagne
And I blushed when you gazed at me that

A crossroad now fork in the road
Do I surrender to your need and my overwhelming wanting?
Or keep myself distant and let you make love to a body
Withhold the soul from grasp and save myself from destruction
And keep myself from being broken down and left to starve.
From the hollowness you leave me with and the lack of you to fill me up again.

I smell sandalwood again
Surrender and satisfaction awaits………..

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