here is it in another form.... -- Challenging Canyon

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Date Posted: 10:16:30 05/13/03 Tue
Author: RF
Subject: here is it in another form....
In reply to: Sanctum B. 's message, "Raven Bird" on 12:16:09 05/12/03 Mon

ok I'll type it for you using different vocab, remeber it is the same thing as you wrote, the poem's good I like that so I'll leave it...

...And out of the darkness,
The hellious bitch did crawl.
Bringing with her demons,
and A blood curdling call...

..| Harsh scream emanated, slicing lithosphere. Obscurity smothering existant cadaver's. Stalwart bitch rupture's deathly ombrage, slithering through toxic cloak, triumphing callous scream. Point erected heavenward, killing not intended. Only a challenge.
Fighting amidst element 'o surprise, knowledge that victim would be caught off guard treasured.
Bearing thought, hellic fetal bolts adopting ghostly likeness, closing mind, she would not stop until they collided. |..

There, I'm quite proud of that, anyhow, like I said you gotta flatter your character make it seem like she/he is the best, more important more powerful than anyone else. What I do to get different words is open a word document, and by using words that I would not think of using like adopted instead of changed etc. anyhow, on word if you type a word you are not happy with in, then right click on the word and go on to synonyms it will give you a range of different words. Ok, anything else???

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Yah, here -- Sanctum Blood, 12:26:38 05/13/03 Tue
- hmmm, let me work my magic... -- Reality, 08:20:15 05/15/03 Thu