Re: Heaven's gift -- AIFC and VIFC fan ciction

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Date Posted: 16:59:15 12/19/01 Wed
Author: Vivi
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Re: Heaven's gift
In reply to: jing yi 's message, "Re: Heaven's gift" on 09:13:11 12/17/01 Mon

I think you should explain about the characters more, cuz the first time i read the descriptions they were kinda rushed and i think there's too many characters so maybe you can explain about them in your story more... Unless you did, and i didn't read them... sorry.. yeah, maybe more descriptive for each character..... Oh yeah, you're story's great though!

>the second chapter is being written and will come out
>very soon. hope you had fun reading the first chapter.
>a few changes will be made to it.
>
>
>jing yi

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Re: Heaven's gift -- Jing Yi, 15:16:05 12/27/01 Thu
- Re: Heaven's gift -- Jing Yi, 08:06:51 02/04/02 Mon