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Date Posted: 07:54:04 11/06/02 Wed
Author: the Lady
Subject: unfinished piece... need comments

I need comments/help/suggestions on this darlings...

-Jennie








The light is blinding,
reflecting off rows of windows
catching the first rays that
escaped over this treelined horizon.

Several inches crunch beneith me;
I used to think the snow couldn't fall
until the leaves were raked away...
I've learned now
the storm doesn't care if you're ready.

The sky has cleared,
an endless and empty blue-grey;
these eyes have only your form beneith me,
rooted so deep,
shivering agaist the winds I throw,
bending beneith the snow I loose down,
hardened against me,
even my softest whispers and caresses.

Perhaps you feel them.
I see you tilting upwards
reaching to the warmth
of the yellow sun I show you,
but you never look up and see me,
the stars after all, are brighter.


I could show you wonders.

I am more than this simple blue,
I am a million shades of sunrise,
countless variations on twilight;
a warm blanket
the clarion observer
background to the heavens...



Together we are time and space;
both aging wisdom,
and a vastness of posibility;
the foundations of art....

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