| Subject: ~Emotions~ (my version of Khung Troi Ngay Xua) |
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DaWnLiTe
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Date Posted: 16:32:59 01/19/02 Sat
Note: this fanfic will be written in english with no purpose of disrespecting anybody or anything...i will not attempt writing in viet until i get further viet lessons:-D. I luv the latest song/video of cam ly -dan truong, khung troi ngay xua, but the ending just tears me up. so here i am revising the story into my version just to endure my pain seeing dan truong suffer somebit. the setting of this story is taken placed in the furture..as for further details, please read, stay tune, and find out!
-when you see this line "------------" it means im switching gears(scenes)
oh and one last thing, this is my first writing so please forgive any errors. I suck by the way :-D
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Year: 2018. The moon shines straight down on the city of Sai Gon in the middle of an October night. It has been 12 after 1 and the city is deep in sleep. No creatures could be found, as the silence takes over the place. On top of a 30 floor building, 2 women cautiously examines their surroundings.
Woman1: [kneeling down to take a last glance at the building next to them, then turn to face the woman to her left] Ready?
Woman2: All set!
Woman1: K…[puts on her leather gloves and looks straight at Woman2] Vick don’t go anywhere and stay onguard. If anything, leave without me..you understand?
Vicki: [with weary eyes] But I -
Woman: no buts [pads Vicki on the shoulder] Dont worry, i'll be back [gives out a grin] Your sis have always live up to her name…haven’t I?
Vicki: Yeah Yeah *straight face* Cammy you watch your back..i'll be watching yours.
Camly: i will *smiles*.
Cam Ly, in a black leather outfit that holds her body perfectly, puts on her yellow sunglasses. She tightens her robe around her waist and takes hold of a gray bag that was on the ground.
Camly: [stands at the edge of the building] See ya Vick
In no time, the creature (camly) flies across the building and smash into the upper window of the 20 feet building right below. After landing in the building safely, she unties her robe and dust off all the small pieces of glasses off her. She then rolls on the furnish floor to get behind an open corner, where she is hidden from all securities.
Camly: [switch an “on” button on the right of her sunglasses that allows her to see those hidden red lasers.] Wow not bad, quite a trap I’ve got here, she thought to herself.
Camly looks up and down, right and left. She then slowly step by step makes her way across the room to get to the far end, where the metal drawer is (which contains the thing she came for).
Camly: [sigh of relieve after she made her way across] Now that that is off my back [camly then face the metal drawer. In front of the drawer is a huge lock combo. Camly gets a hold of her right sleeve with her teeth and reads the combo that she have written on her risk] 8..3..6..2..1..4 [opens the lock combo] Voila!
Camly opens the gray bag and fill it up with all the cash. Turns around, she cautiously makes her way back. Half way from the window, her back accidentally touches one of the lasers.
Alarm: E E E E E E E E E E E E E E E E
Camly: DARN ME!
[Note: please leave comments and tell me if your not getting a word im saying in the story! if it is the case..lol i'll do my best to umm clarify things.]
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