Walks in...settling herself down in a corner and taking in the sights. -- Inner Commons

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Date Posted: 16:46:29 01/04/03 Sat
Author: Kristyn
Subject: Walks in...settling herself down in a corner and taking in the sights.

She smoothes her cream tunic which is over a long sleaved ocean blue shirt and forest green leggings. Her tunic is loosely belted with a blue and green rope. She bends down to retie her black boots which lace up to just below her knees. She checks her black curly hair which is sloppily french braided in an effort to keep it out of her face. Instantly her eyes are flooded with tears and her brain with memories of her parents, her mother in particular. Her mother used to braid her hair like that. That was untill the illness. Kristyn had been one of the few people in the town to survive. She had come to Tundra Island in search of a better life. 'This doesnt seem much better' she thinks to herself 'If only someone would talk to me'

I'm not sure what point of view you guys post in but i felt that this post needed 3rd person...if your character would like to talk to Kristyn right now...that would be great...

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Re: Walks in...settling herself down in a corner and taking in the sights. -- Damien, 21:10:37 01/04/03 Sat
- she enters -- Aia, 06:06:04 01/05/03 Sun