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Date Posted: 10:23:25 01/09/03 Thu
Hey you guys. I was just sitting here, when a plot hit me for a movie. I was reading some of the post's, and thought something up. Since I write, (alot too) I wanted to make a screen play, or whatever they call it, for a movie. Let me know what you think about it.
"Let's Make History":
A really, really famous actor/musician finds himself lonely at the top. He spends all his time alone, or around people who only like him for his status. He is longing for true love. That's part of the reason he is so popular, because he writes the most beautiful love songs, and acts gloriously in romantic roles.
One night out of boredom, he goes online in his hotel room. He looks up a message board, (like this one) on him. Like a massage board dedicated to him. He ends up reading this one post from a girl who is super intelligent, funny, and all around just nice. He is intrested in her. She is not a nut ball odd job, just a cool girl.
So he pretends to be a big fan, and a girl to befriend her. They spend ALOT of time talking in chat, and they become very close, bestfriends. Now the girl tells him everything, her deepest darkest thoughts, because she thinks he's a girl, she think's he is her *best girlfriend Sheila*. Somewhere along the line he falls madly in love with her. He has finally found his "true love".
So he plans to meet up with her after months of becoming close. He sets it up so they meet in the lobby of a hotel, where he won't be bothered, or noticed. He sits in one of those big chairs in the lobby, hidded behind a newspaper, so she won't see him. He then she's her waiting, and tells her "You waiting for someone". Of course she is surprized to see him, and thinks nothing of it though. He tells her it's been him she has been talking to. She gets really mad, because she is hurt. She had trusted him, and he had lied to her. She she leaves.
Then you see him on tour, and then on a movie set, and he is suffering because he loves her. He is depressed, and losing his mind without her. So he tries to email her, send her letters, and everything. Nothing works.
Meantime she is back home, and her ex boyfriend comes back, and asks her to marry him. Out of anger, she accepts. So flipp to a few months of them togther again, and here it is their wedding day. She finally realizes she doesn't love him, but loves the actor/musician. She leaves.
Back to the actor/musician. In his last attempt to win her back, he writes a love song. It becomes a major hit. She hears it on the way to seeing him. It makes her realize that she is right in loving him. Here he is at his biggest concert, the last one of the year, and he sees her in the front row.
The meet after the show, and she tells him a bunch of things. Like how she needs to know he is real, and that the playboy lifestyles she had heard about what not true. He then tells her, "Let's make history. Since your all dolled up for a wedding, lets have one!" He then takes her to get a ring, they get married. The last scene of the movie is them in their house together, laying on the sofa, talking about happy things, and what not. The scene is in slow motion, and you see them, laughing, and goofing around. Then it fades to the credits.
Okay, okay it may be a bit cheesy, but I think it is a really good plot. Tell me what you all think okay? I am open to critisms. (Only constructive ones please!) I would love the feed back. Thanks, talk you all soon,
+Lillith+
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