Date Posted:13:24:36 01/29/02 Tue Author: ridcully Subject: Re: A bit of my story In reply to:
novae
's message, "Re: A bit of my story" on 20:15:30 01/28/02 Mon
>That was good. Quickly into the thick of things, that
>is always good. But it could be improved by working up
>a little more atmosphere. It just is missing a little
>something.
>
>But dont get me wrong it is still good writing, keep
>it up. :)
