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| Subject: some poems....and a writer in desperate need of feedback | |
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Author: Chipmunk |
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Date Posted: 20:48:19 08/05/02 Mon Not a whole lot of people genearally read my stuff here but since no one seems to have posted much since i've been here last....like nothing...i'll put up some of my more recient poems. Enjoy I wrote this today because of how emotional i got just driving past my grandmother's old house. I've driven by it thousands of times but last night was different for some reason. I also have an idea for a story/shortie/capture whatever. It’s amazing what the heart will put you though All I had to do was drive by the house And too many memories came back. 7 years after you left me I still find myself spending random nights Crying myself to sleep Because you aren’t in my life Those Easter egg hunts, How exciting they were Hiding in the leaves How thrilling life was Life seems so empty now With you gone from my life Was God angry with me? Is that why he took you away 7 years later I’m still missing everything about you But I can still remember Those little things that made life so grand Walking back into that house 6 years after you left Brought back so many memories Memories I hadn’t thought of in a long time Someone else lived there But your heart still soared though it I practically lived in that house I knew it like the back of my hand But those tears just wouldn’t stop falling Looking at what used to be Wishing it was what was now It’s been 7 years And I still miss you like crazy Wondering what you’d say to me now Wondering how proud of me you’d be Wondering how often I’d be there instead of here The wound may have healed But that scar still remains No matter how hard God tries He can’t make me forget my favorite person No matter what he does My grandma Will always live inside my heart. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jeff helped me start this one but i lost the creativity while writing it and stopped, hoping to finish it later. well later came today. it's not quite the same mood/feeling as when i started but it's the general idea. my dad was almost as disappointing tonight as he was the night 7 of my friends graduated, including Kenny and Molly. *shakes head* As I search for the words in me I lose every thought Writer’s block strikes again No one can see Why it is that I write No one can see It’s all a key to me I live in my writing I live in my pen Life just wouldn’t matter Without my words to express Mother Nature is beautiful Love is so painful Life is so disappointing Friendship is only an illusion We spend every waking moment Trying to fit in Make someone like us Feel like we matter I’m tired of fighting I want to get away Away from this crazy world And into my calm, relaxing images of words The past is painful The present burns What will the future bring? No one could possibly understand My desperate need for words Nor could they ever understand me My life may be meaningful to some But to most, I’m meaningless I’m tired of fighting Let me alone I’m tired of holding on I’ve watched too many friends Slip through my own hands To get close to anymore of you Is all this pain really worth it all? ~~~~~~~~~~ I originally had something different written but i went to copy and paste it to a different word page but i lost it so i had to write it over by memory and then i just went from there. this one seemed a little harder to write since i'm in a depressed mood b/c Chad isn't here. I might add on to this later. I also have another Chad one i could share w/ you, but we'll wait. Have you ever felt that feeling? It goes deep inside you The happiness will only come When he’s around You know everything will be alright When he holds you in his arms And kisses you with his lips He is the reason for living Just being around him, You know This is what life is all about All the pain and suffering of the past Is worth finding that special someone And spending the rest of your life with him ~~~~~~ i have no titles for any of them so i'm open to suggestions. -Chipmunk [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |