I'm Not Finished *story* -- Da Daydream Hot Spot Part II

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Date Posted: 17:42:43 04/11/02 Thu
Author: Dawn
Subject: I'm Not Finished *story*
In reply to: Dawn 's message, "I'm Not Finished *lyrics*" on 16:38:53 04/11/02 Thu

~Dawn was walking arcoss campus after her last class when Brandie walked up to her.~
Brandie: Wuz up gurl?
Dawn: Nuthin chill. Sup wit you?
Brandie: Nuthin glad to go home.
Dawn: I'm feelin that. What you fitna (don't laugh at my ghetto country word, lol) do?
Brandie: I'on know. Go home and chill prolly.
Dawn: Why don't you come over my house?
Brandie: Aight. I ain't got nuthin but time anywayz. I gotta stop by my job, but then I'll be right over.
Dawn: Aight. See ya in about 20?
Brandie: Yeah.
~They both got in their cars and went their seperate ways. 20 minutes later there was a knock at Dawn's apartment door.~
Dawn: ~opening the door~ Wuz up?
Brandie: My appetite. What y'all got to eat?
Dawn: ~laughing~ Come on.
~They walked into the kitchen and Brandie started making her a sandwich.~
Brandie: Where's Bee?
Dawn: I don't know. Prolly over Jay's. I'on know why though. Ain't like he do ish for her, but you know that's her man. ~rolling her eyes~
Brandie: ~laughing~ Whateva. But speaking of men, I guess you haven't heard.
Dawn: Heard what?
Brandie: That IMx and B2K will be in town for the week.
Dawn: Yeah, I heard. So what?
Brandie: Oh don't front like you ain't excited. You know you wanna see Jarell.
Dawn: I mean yeah I wanna see him, but I'm not gon flip over the nigga like you be doing for Rome. Besides me and Rell are over.
Brandie: Yeah, but you want him back and you know it. Just admit it. Don't you?

~w/ Brittany over Jay's~
Brittany: ~hanging up the phone~ Hey Jay Kima's on her way over to get me so are we still on for tonite?
Jay: Umm, tonite? I can't boo. I got plans.
Brittany: Plans? What plans?
Jay: I told my boys I'd go to the game with them tonite. You mad at me?
Brittany: ~mad as hell, but trying not to show it~ No, it's okay. Just go and have a good time.
Jay: Oh and I'ma have to cancel our date for Friday too.
Brittany: What?! Jay if I didn't know any better I'd think you were cheatin on me.
Jay: Naw, neva that boo. I just got plans.
Brittany: Here we go with that plans shit again.
Jay: But I do...
~A car pulled into the drive and honked it's horn.~
Brittany: Whateva Jay. That's Kima. I'll talk to you lata.
~Brittany started walking to the door.~
Jay: What? No love?
Brittany: ~turning around~ You don't deserve it.
Jay: Please? ~giving her puppy dog eyes~
~Brittany walked over and kissed Jay and then walked outside and got in the car.~
Kima: Wuz da deal chick?
Brittany: Nada here. Glad I didn't have class today.
Kima: Well everybody can't be lucky enough to have class every other Monday.
Brittany: Yeah, everybody can't be tight like me.
Kima: Girl please I might have class everyday, but I also got five tickets front row center and backstage passes to the IMx/B2K concert this Saturday. ~reaching in her purse and pulling out the tickets~
Brittany: What?! How you get these?
Kima: You know my boo Omari hooked me up.
Brittany: Damn gurl you got a good man. Don't let him go.
Kima: I don't plan on it.
~They pulled up in the apartment complex and went upstairs to Brittany and Dawn's apartment.~
Brittany: I know you're here. Where y'all at?
Dawn: In the kitchen.
~They walked in the kitchen.~
Dawn: Wuz up y'all?
Bee/Kima: N.A.D.T.H. Not a damn thang here.
Dawn: Yeah, us too.
Brandie: Don't think since they here you gon get out of that question.
Kima: What question?
Brandie: I asked her if she still wants Jarell.
Brittany: Yep, she sure does. Y'all should hear the stuff she be recording on that lil diary tape thing about him when she don't think nobody is listening.
Dawn: ~eyes getting all big~ You lil sneaky. No wonder you be knowing all my bizness.
Brittany: I'm just telling it like it is. But I've got more important news. I'll let Kima tell y'all.
Kima: We've got front row center tickets AND backstage passes to the IMx/B2K concert this Saturday courtesy of my man Omari.
Brandie: Did I hear you correctly? Did you say backstage passes?
Kima: Sure did.
Brandie: Aww snaps! Rome here I come.
~Everybody laughed and then the door swung open.~
FV: GUESS WHAT?! ~running round the house~ Where y'all at?
Brittany: The kitchen Gabri.
Gabrielle: ~walking into the kitchen~ Guess what?
Dawn: You ever heard of knocking?
Gabrielle: Why knock when I have a key. Anywayz guess what?!
Kima: What girl damn? lol
Gabrielle: Guess who I heard is the special guest at the IMx/B2K concert?
B,B,D,K: Who?
Gabrielle: Nelly.
Brandie: Man, he ain't nobody special.
Brittany: Nelly? As in my ex Nelly?
Gabrielle: Yes, as in your ex Nelly and I heard he's looking for you.
Brittany: ...

~w/ B2K & IMx~
Jarell: ~singing~ I'm going, going, back, back, to Cali, Cali
Marq: Why you so excited?
Jarell: Just ready to be at home and see all the fine ladies.
Kelton: Hoping he run into Dawn.
Jarell: Whateva. She broke up with me remember?
Kelton: Yeah, but you still love that girl.
Jarell: ~rolling his eyes~ Whateva you say big bro.
Omari: I just wanna see Kima. I been away from my gurl TOO long.
Jerome: Ay is she still coo with Brandie?
Omari: Yeah. Why? And what happened with y'all?
Jerome: I'on know. Just lost touch I guess. But I been thinking about her a lot lately so I might call her when we get there.
Druex: What about that girl, uhh, Gabrielle?
Jarell: Dawn's cousin?
Druex: Yeah that girl is fine. I don't think she was ever feeling me though.
Jerome: What?! I thought the ladies couldn't resist Fizz. After he put down his rap their trapped.
Druex: lol Yeah, well I don't plan on coming back empty handed this time.
De'mario: Y'all make me sick.
Omari: Why? Cuz we all got girls and you don't?
De'mario: Whateva nigga. I got a few shorties on the side y'all don't know about.
Jarell: I agree with Mario. Y'all making me sick to my stomach. And Nelly ain't no better. He only agreed to come out here cuz Brittany is here.
Druex: That's just mean we have priorities and you don't. ~laughing~
Jarell: Whateva. ~walking away and singing~ I'm going, going, back, back, to Cali, Cali.

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Replies:

Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Gabrielle, 20:31:31 04/11/02 Thu
- Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Brandie, 21:00:11 04/11/02 Thu
  - Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Bee, 17:34:58 04/12/02 Fri
    - Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Dawn, 15:47:56 04/19/02 Fri
      - Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Gabrielle, 16:36:13 04/19/02 Fri
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- kima, 12:43:17 04/27/02 Sat
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Dawn, 16:22:57 05/16/02 Thu
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Brandie, 22:07:36 05/16/02 Thu
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Bee, 10:34:26 05/18/02 Sat
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- kima, 20:50:09 05/18/02 Sat
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Brandie, 15:48:16 05/30/02 Thu
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- kima, 16:00:20 06/02/02 Sun
        Re: I'm Not Finished *story* -- Dawn, 17:06:04 06/03/02 Mon