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Subject: Re: Noble Eagle (Remembering 9-11 Revised)

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 17:37:48 09/01/02 Sun
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In reply to: Jim AKA Rapid-Fire 's message, "Noble Eagle (Remembering 9-11 Revised)" on 07:32:28 09/01/02 Sun

I like the rewrite. Powerful message and well said. Excellent!

>NOTE: A repost from last year for some, new for
>others. If anyone is interested, I still have copies
>of the tribute issue of WRITE ON!! which contains
>poetry about the cowardly attack written by poets from
>around the world (including 3 of mine and one from Mr.
>L). Email me at jimnipoetry@yahoo.com
>
>
>
>
>Noble Eagle, many in our sky,
>naught but a tear in its eye.
>Searching for enemies far and near,
>to erase the nation's fear.
>
>Also ships off our coasts, west and east,
>watching for acts from a coward beast.
>Thinking they could watch our country fall,
>they don't know Americans at all.
>
>So much destruction within our land,
>retribution now near at hand.
>Blind revenge not in our eyes,
>just justice as that eagle cries.
>
>We've said it before, we'll say it again,
>you know our patience is getting thin.
>If you hit us that day with a new attack,
>you'll pay more dearly when we strike back.
>
>You'll learn not to mess with the USA,
>for we will never forget that day.
>That's just something that you best not do,
>if you didn't know, then we'll teach you.

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Noble Eagle (Remembering 9-11 Revised)	Jim AKA Rapid-Fire	18:39:20 09/05/02 Thu

Re: Noble Eagle (Remembering 9-11 Revised)	Moonchild	23:12:10 09/06/02 Fri