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Date Posted: 04:48:42 03/28/04 Sun
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's message, "Re: 2nd Part to "I Know You Want Me" A U and Jarell Story" on 04:46:37 03/28/04 Sun
>>>De'Mario-Britney, You ready to go?
>>>Britney-Yeah baby.I'm ready. Wait,Y/N where do I stay
>>>at?
>>>U-Um...De'Mario,can she stay with you?
>>>De'Mario-Sure.
>>>Britney-Thank you,baby.(kisses him)
>>>U-Ew! Ya'll nasty! Get a room!
>>>Britney-Don't hate!(Gives you the finger)
>>>U-On what?!(Kiss Druex with alot of tongue)
>>>De'Mario-Damn! Can ya'll breathe?!
>>>Druex-(Gives De'Mario the fu*k you look) Shut up and
>>>let's go!
>>>*Ya'll get in the car and drive off.*
>>>*Your Point of View*
>>>Druex is so good to me. I wonder why he even told me
>>>that Jarell was cheatin on me with Tara. Oh well it's
>>>all been said and done! I love him so much...he makes
>>>me feel things I never thought I'd ever feel. He
>means
>>>so much to me and if anything ever happened to him, I
>>>don't know what I'd do. When we did it I felt
>>>something funny. But what it was,I have yet to know.
>>>He did have a shocked face when we finished.
>>>*Flashback*
>>>Druex-You gonna' have my baby?!
>>>U-Oh YES!I'm gonna' have your baby! DRUEX!
>>>*End Of Flashback*
>>>OH MY GOD!!! Druex...Druex...He didn't...He didn't...
>>>*End of Your Point of View*
>>>*You look at Druex with tears in your eyes and he
>>>looks back.*
>>>Druex-Baby, what's wrong?
>>>U-Druex...Druex....I...I(you passed out)
>>>Druex-(Stops the car) BABY?! Y/N??!! Y/N?!!
>>>U-(Silent)
>>>Shad-WHAT'S WRONG WITH MY SISTER?! NIGGA' WHAT DID
>YOU
>>>DO TO HER?!
>>>Druex-NOTHIN'!! Look, De' and Shad,I'm about 2
>minutes
>>>from ya'lls house I'mma drop ya'll and go home.
>>>Britney- Is she okay?!
>>>Druex-I don't know!
>>>De'Mario-Lemme' check her pulse.(Checks it) She's
>>>still breathing. Take her home and put her in her
>PJ's
>>>and put her in the bed to let her rest.
>>>Druex-How you know what to do?!
>>>De'Mario-Nigga I'm goin' to school to be a doctor!
>>>Druex-Okay!
>>>*He takes you home and does what he is supposed to
>do.
>>>You wake up 3 hours later.*
>>>U-Druex?!
>>>Druex-Yeah baby?
>>>U-We need to talk!
>>>Druex-About what?
>>>U-Us. What happened today.
>>>Druex-Ok.
>>>U-Well.....
>>>*Continued*
>>>U-Well...you remember when we made love?
>>>Druex-Yes.
>>>U-And you asked me something.
>>>Druex-What did I ask?
>>>U-If I wanted to have your baby.
>>>Druex-Yes.
>>>U-And I said yes. You were hittin' that spot and I
>>>couldn't say anything else.But yes.
>>>Druex-Mmn hmmn.
>>>U-And you had a look on your face when we finished.
>Do
>>>you know something?
>>>Druex-Y/N....I have to tell you something....I forgot
>>>the condom.
>>>U-YOU WHAT?!
>>>Druex-....Yes. I'm sorry I didn't tell you but I
>>>wanted to see if you knew.Ok?
>>>U-WHAT?! IT'S NOT OKAY! I COULD BE PREGNANT! WHAT'S
>>>GONNA' HAPPEN TO MY FUTURE?! I CAN'T RAISE A CHILD!
>MY
>>>MOM WILL NOT APPROVE OF THIS! SHE'LL HATE ME MORE
>THAN
>>>I HATE HER ASS! SHAD IS GONNA' KILL ME AND HOW WILL I
>>>KNOW THAT YOU WILL STAY WITH ME AFTER I HAVE IT?! You
>>>know what?...Lemme' calm down....It's ok. I'll just
>go
>>>get tested and we'll get the results in a few weeks.
>>>Let's call and make an appointment to a clinic.
>>>Druex-Okay. And if you are pregnant, I will be more
>>>than happy to help raise it.
>>>U-Ok.
>>>*De'Mario's Point of View*
>>>Damn! Britney is soo sexy! Look at her, she's
>>>perfect,everything I've ever wanted. She's beautiful
>>>and I just love the way she plays with my ears. Boy
>oh
>>>boy! If I ever had the chance to be with her
>>>intimately, I would satisfy her in ways she never
>>>thought were possible. I wonder what she got locked
>up
>>>for....hmmn...oh well, I won't ask. She might get
>>>upset. I know we just met and all, but already, I'm
>>>comfortable with her. Just look at her laid across
>the
>>>bed with her head on my chest and I'm playing in her
>>>hair. She's looking up at me with her beautiful green
>>>eyes.She has a look on her face. She's not white,
>>>she's Puerto Rican and Mexican. She's so beautiful. I
>>>hope she's feelin' me like I'm feelin her.
>>>Britney-De'Mario, can you do me a favor?
>>>De'Mario-Sure.
>>>Britney-Can you give me a massage?
>>>De'Mario-Ok. Where?
>>>Britney-Everywhere.
>>>De'Mario-Umm...OK.
>>>Britney-Take off my shirt and skirt.
>>>De'Mario-Ok.(He takes her clothes off of her)Now
>what?
>>>Britney-Put your strong hands to work.
>>>De'Mario-(Laughing) What ever you want.
>>>*He starts at her shoulders and works his way down
>her
>>>back and he reaches her bra strap and he tries his
>>>best not to unfasten her bra but his hands were
>>>refusing to listen to him and he did it anyways.She
>>>turns around and takes the bra off and looks at him.*
>>>Britney-What's wrong?
>>>De'Mario-Ok...I'm looking at your breasts and I'm
>>>trying my best to resist you but I want to make sure
>>>you know what you are about to do and if you wanna'
>do
>>>it. I mean we just met and all but hey, it's your
>>>decision. I'm not into rushing people into doing
>>>things they aren't ready to do.I just hope you know
>>>what your getting yourself into.
>>>Britney-Okay...but I want to do this. De'Mario, I
>>>haven't had sex or made love in 5 years. I miss the
>>>feeling.
>>>De'Mario-HEY!!! WHAT CAN I SAY?!
>>>Britney-(Laughing)Then let's do this then! Come On
>>>Raz! Let's see what your workin' with!
>>>De'Mario-You have no idea!(Takes off her panties)
>>>*End of De'Mario's Point of View*
>>>Chapter Fourteen(New Lovers)
>>>*You get a phone call and it's Melanie,your best
>>>friend in Alabama.*
>>>U-Hello?
>>>Melanie-Hey Y/N!
>>>U-Melanie?!
>>>Melanie-Yeah girl it's me!
>>>U-Oh my god! I haven't heard from you in a hot
>minute!
>>>Melanie-I know! But girl lemme' tell you, I'm in your
>>>hood and girl I met this fine ass nigga!
>>>U-Werd?! How he look?!(Druex is lookin' at you like
>>>you done lost yo' damn mind. lol)
>>>Melanie-He tall and brown skinned, he has those lil'
>>>cuts in his eyebrow, he has bat earrings...
>>>U-Say no more. What was his name?
>>>Melanie-Mar..Marq...somethin'.
>>>U-Marques?!
>>>Melanie-Yeah. Dat's it! You know him?
>>>U-Yeah! Dat's my boi! Why? You wanna' talk to him?
>>>Melanie-Shit! Who wouldn't wanna' talk to his fine
>>ass!
>>>U-How'd ya'll meet?
>>>Melanie-I was walking to my car from the club and I
>>>wasn't looking where I was walkin' and I ran into him
>>>and I dropped my purse and everything fell out of it.
>>>He bent over to help me get all of my things and when
>>>we got up, we looked each other in the face and he
>>>smiled at me and told me I was sexy. He asked for my
>>>name and number and I told him and he gave me his.
>>>Isn't it (818)913-0934?(Dat number isn't the real
>>>one,so please don't call it!)
>>>U-Yeah. You gon' call him?
>>>Melanie-I don't know...I'm kinda scared.
>>>U-Don't be. CALL HIM GIRL!!!!
>>>*Shad's Point of View*
>>>Dammit man! Y/N and that damn Druex gettin' on my
>damn
>>>nerves! I mean Y/N and Druex are a good couple and
>all
>>>but I know I can treat her better than he can. What
>am
>>>I saying?! She's my sister. I'm 18 years old and I'm
>>>in my Senior year at Inglewood High. Even though
>she's
>>>my little sister I have to admit, she's cute as hell!
>>>I understand that this is incest but we've been
>>>through alot together and have had the best of times.
>>>Even down to the time when I saw her naked.
>>>*Flashback*
>>>Shad-Hey Y/N!!! Hurry up in there!!! I gotta' pee!
>>>U-Just a minute Shad!
>>>Shad-I can't hold it!
>>*Shad's thoughts*
>>I couldn't hold it any longer so I walked in,went to
>>the toilet and ripped it out and did my thang. Y/N was
>>just getting out of the shower and she just froze. I
>>guess she was just as shocked about it as I was and I
>>couldn't help myself so I had to look.Just as her eyes
>>were fixed on my penis, I walked up to her and kissed
>>her and started to touch her but she stopped me.*
>>U-OH MY GOD! SHAD GET OUT!
>>Shad-DAMN! Iight,sorry,I had to go.Let's try to forget
>>this ever happened.
>>*I got out of the bathroom and a minute later she came
>>out and went to her room. I heard her laughing so I
>>decided to go knock on her door to see what it was all
>>about.*
>>Shad-(knocks on your door)
>>U-WHO IS IT?
>>Shad-Shad. Open up the door sis.
>>U-Ok.(You opened the door)What do you want?
>>Shad-Nothing. Can I come in?
>>U-Sure. Come on in. Make yourself comfortable.
>>Shad-Ok.
>>U-Now what do you want?
>>Shad-To find out what we were doing in that bathroom.
>>U-Shad, To tell you the truth, I don't even know what
>>we were doin'. I guess we let our emotions and
>>feelings get the best of us. I don't know what came
>>over me.
>>Shad-Me neither, but I wanna' do this.(He kisses you
>>again)
>>*This time you kissed him back and he layed you on the
>>bed and was on top of you kissing you. He ran his
>>hands across your stomach and it made you giggle. You
>>flipped him over and rubbed his chest down. You felt
>>his abs and he began to take off your shirt and your
>>bra. He began to suck your twins. After that he layed
>>you on your back and took your clothes off and ran his
>>hands all over your body as you moaned, beggin' for
>>more. He was really enjoyin' himself so he decided
>>"What the hell?! She may be my sister but sometimes
>>you just have to say FUCK IT!!! Like I'm about to do
>>her!" Her took two of his fingers and ran them
>>straight in you. You kinda' screamed cause you were
>>still a virgin but he didn't realize it until you
>>asked him to slow his ass down! You made him stop and
>>you dropped to your knees and you did your brother a
>>favor! A lil' sucky sucky!!!(YOU FREAK!!!) One minute
>>later, the door bell rang.It was your mom.Ya'll got
>>dressed with the quickness.
>>U-Mom?! You're home early.
>>Y/M-Yeah...Now get out of my way so I can go take a
>>shower and lie down.
>>U-Okay.
>>Y/M-Hey Shad. What's wrong?
>>Shad-Nothing. Just a little upset that's all.
>>Y/M-Why?
>>U and Shad-No reason.(Y'all laugh it off)
>>*End of Flashback*
>>See, I know she felt something just As I did. Even
>>though we might never admit it, we both have feelings
>>for each other.
>>*End of Shad's Point of View*
>>U-(Thinkin to yourself)I wonder why Shad keeps lookin'
>>at me.(Talkin' out loud) Shad? You okay?
>>Shad-Ye..yeah. I'm good.
>>U-You sure?
>>Shad-Yeah.
>>U-Okay.
>>Druex-We gotta go get the boyz.
>>U-Iight.
>>*Britney's Point of View*
>>Damn! De'Mario made it feel like it was my first time!
>>Damn his shit is phat! I swear to god that this is the
>>best moment of my life.He's being so gentle with me,
>>as if he's gonna' hurt me. But I want it in the worst
>>way!He's really loving me now.
>>*Now*
>>De'Mario-Damn! You kinda tight!
>>Britney-Oh really?! You really phat! And you know what
>>else?
>>De'Mario-What else?
>>Britney-I want it faster and harder!
>>De'Mario-Oh you like it rough?!
>>Britney-HELL YEAH! Now gimme' what you've got!(She a
>>freak!!lol)
>>De'Mario-Iight! I'm bout' ta' break ya' back!
>>*De'Mario stopped workin' it in circles and was just
>>stabbin' her,breakin' her back, smackin'ass, givin'
>>back shots and all! The whole nine yards! He broke the
>>bed on her and was still goin! He had her on the wall
>>and the floor and the chair. He had it doggy style,
>>one-leg up, sideways, and a million other ways! He was
>>workin' it out!*
>>Damn! He wasn't lyin' when he said that he was gonna'
>>break my back! Damn he feels so good! After we reached
>>our peaks, we layed there in fresh sweat looking at
>>each other! Damn he's so strong! He had the best shit
>>I've ever had in my life! His lips are so soft and
>>moist! Damn I love him!
>>*End of Britney's Point of View*
>Britney-I love you De'Mario.
>De'Mario-I love you too Britney.(Kisses her)
>*Jarell's Point of View*
>Damn! How could I be so stupid?! I fucked around and
>lost my girl, got my ass beat, and of all things, the
>girl I was with can't even fight! Damn I miss Y/N. If
>only she knew that I still love her. There's no way
>that she'll ever forgive me or even wanna' see me
>because of what I did to her. I bet she hates my ass
>right now and I really feel like an asshole. I love
>her so much but I had to let my dick do the thinkin'
>for me instead of my brain! Shit, but hey, it's not
>like I did anything bad. She was locked up for over
>two months and I was feenin' for some pussy real bad,
>so I found some. Even though that pussy belonged to
>Druex! Fuck that nigga! His girl came over and said
>that she was lonely and so was I and she said that she
>was tired of Druex so I gave her the love she was
>missin' outta' the kindness of my dick and not my
>heart. Shit, she enjoyed it, and so did I. I ain't
>even gon' lie. But she was nothin' compared to what I
>felt when I was inside of Y/N. She gave me that
>feelin',you know the one you get when you're with the
>one you know loves you as much as you love them? And I
>just stepped on her heart and betrayed her love,
>trust, and most of all, her heart! I have to get her
>back,even if it means hurtin' that damn Druex to get
>to her!
>*End of Jarell's Point of View*
>*Omari's Point of View*
>Why is this girl bothering me?! Who the hell is she?!
>Maybe I should call security...Naw that would be mean.
>So I decide to talk to her.
>Girl-Oh my god! Are you Omarion?
>Omari-Yes but please call me Omari.
>Girl-Hi. I'm Britany and I'm your number one fan.
>Omari-(Kisses her hand) Nice to meet you.
>Britany-(Smiling) You so SEXY.
>Omari-Not as sexy as you. How old are you?
>Britany-17. Why?(Smiling like the Cookie Monster when
>he's about to get a cookie)
>Omari-Cause I was about to ask for your number and If
>you wanna go to a party with me and my boys.
>Britany-Your boys?
>Omari-Druex,I mean Fizz,Boog,Raz,Bat,O'Ryan,and Bow.
>Britany-Any girls gon' be there?
>Omari-Yeah,Druex' girl,Y/N.
>Britany-Y/N?! Fareal? Dat's my cousin! I'mma have to
>kill her for not tellin' me that she knows ya'll!
>Omari-Your her cousin? When's your birthday?
>Britany-November 12,1986.
>Omari-Farealz? Dat's my Birthday!
>Britany-I know!
>Omari-Well...do you wanna' go?
>Britany-Oh yeah.
>Omari-Ok. Come with me to the house so I can get your
>cousin.
>Britany-Ok.
>Damn! What a coincidence, you meet your perfect match
>in the strangest places don't you. Anyways, I'm bout'
>ta take her to Druex house to get Y/N and get ready to
>go to this party.
>*End of Omari's point of View*
>Chapter Fifteen(A Party to Remember)
>Britany and Omari get in his Benz and drive to meet
>you,Druex and Shad. But you and Druex have to go get
>De'Mario and Britney then you all are gonna' meet up
>at your house and go to the party.
>U-(Calling Britney)
>Britney-Hello?(Soundin' sleepy)
>U-Girl get yo' ass up! We gotta' go to the party!
>Britney-Oh shit! I forgot! Iight.
>U-One.(Hang up the phone)
>Druex-(calling De'mario and Omari)
>Omari-Yeah?
>De'Mario-HOLLA'ATCHA'BOI!
>Druex-Yo' De' get yo' ass up and meet us at Y/N's
>house.
>De'Mario-Iight. What for?
>Druex-The party!
>De'Mario-Shit I forgot! Iight be there in ten.
>Druex-You too O.
>Omari-Wait...somebody wanna talk to Y/n.
>Druex-Ok.
>U-Hello?
>Devani-GIRL WHY DA HELL AIN'T TELL ME YOU KNEW OMARI?!
>U-What the fuck?! Britany?!
>Britany-Yeah girl it's me!
>U-How? How'd you meet Omari?
>Britany-In the mall. He was walkin' alone so I
>followed and questioned him, we got to know each other
>and then we hooked up.
>U-Good. Well I hope you got somethin' to wear to the
>party.
>Britany-Girl...you know I got that covered!(She takes
>off her clothes and has a mini skirt and halter top on
>under it)
>Omari-DAMN!
>Britany-(Laughin) Yeah...see you there.
>Omari-Y/N I MIGHT NOT MAKE IT TO THAT PARTY!(Kissin'
>on Britany)
>U-OMARI YOU BETTA' LEAVE MY COUSIN ALONE!
>Britany-Stop Omari!(laughing) Girl, I gotta' go. See
>you in ten. One.
>U-One.
>Omari-(Calling Jarell)
>Jarell-Hello?
>Omari-Yeah boi. Get ya' ass up.
>Jarell-Why?
>Omari-A Party.
>Jarell-Who gon' be there?
>Omari-Y/n, Shad, De'Mario...
>Jarell-Hold up. Y/N gon' be there?!
>Omari-Yeah.
>Jarell-(Thinkin' to himself) I might be able to get
>her back, a perfect opportunity to get back at
>Druex.(Talkin' to Omari) Iight. I'll meet you there.
>Omari-You bringin' Tara?
>Jarell-Yeah.
>Omari-Iight. See you there.
>Jarell-Iight. One.
>Omari-One.
*About ten minutes later everyone is at your house ready to go to the party. You do a check to make sure everyone is there.*
U-Omari?
Omari-Here.
U-Druex?
Druex-Here.
U-Britney?
Britney-Here.
U-De'Mario?
De'Mario-Here.
U-Shad?
Shad-Here.
U-O'Ryan?
O'Ryan-Here.
U-Britany?
Britany-Here.
U-Marques?
Marques-Here.
U-Jerome?
Jerome-Here.
U-Kelton?
Kelton-Here.
U-Melanie?
Melanie-Here.
U-Iight, everybody's here. Let's go!
*Ya'll get in ya'lls cars and ride out. At the party you and Druex were dancing and you got tired so you sat down.*
U-You can keep dancin' if you promise not to get hard on anyone but me.
Druex-Okay.
U-I'mma' go sit down. My feet hurt.
Druex-Iight.
*You go sit down and a few seconds later, someone comes from behind you and starts kissing your neck. You let out a little moan because you thought it was Druex.*
U-Ooh...Not at the party.
Person-We can go to a room baby.
U-JARELL?! What the hell is you doin'?!
Jarell-Nothin', talkin' to my baby.
U-YO' BABY?! Jarell you betta' get the fuck away from me before I....
*Druex saw you and Jarell argueing and then he saw it....Jarell kissed you and you kissed him back but then you pushed him back. Before Druex could get to ya'll Tara had come up to to him and stated talking.*
Tara-Druex?(Teary eyed)
Druex-Tara...I don't have time for this.
Tara-YES YOU DO!
Druex- OH YEAH?! AND WHY IS THAT?!
Tara-BECAUSE...
Druex-Because what?!
Tara-I'M PREGNANT!!!!(Says it loudly so everybody can hear it and then laughs)
Druex-YOU'RE WHAT?!
Tara-I SAID I'M PREGNANT AND I KNOW IT'S YOURS!
*Just then you started crying, went up to Druex and slapped the shit outta' him.*
U-HOW COULD YOU DRUEX?! AFTER ALL THIS?! YOU NEVER TOLD ME! AND YOU KNOW WHAT...I THOUGHT YOU WERE SOMETHING SPECIAL! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME! YET YOU IMPREGNATED THIS BITCH! AND YOU KNOW WHAT?! I SHOULDA' STAYED WITH JARELL INSTEAD OF THIS SHIT!(Jarell was smiling)
Druex-Wait. Y/N This isn't what it seems, I didn't cheat on you...he did(Points to Jarell) and If she is pregnant, It ain't mine.
U-HOW YOU KNOW?!
Druex-Because I strapped twice!
*With that, you slapped the shit outta him again.*
U-Why'd you let me embarrass you and myself like this?! You shoulda' said somethin'!
Druex-(Laughin)I tried!
*Just then you punched Tara in her face and a huge fight began! Everybody was throwin' bows! Once all ya'll got thrown out of the party, there was a scramble cause' the cops were outside. You were mixed up in the bunch and you couldn't find Druex but someone had grabbed your hand and you left with them, hoping to get back to Druex. When you got in the car and they pulled off, the person said something.*
Chapter Sixteen(A Crime and Punishment/Tears)
Person-Damn! Baby you sure you wanna' go to my place?!
U-Oh My God! Let me outta' this car Jarell!
Jarell-I like the way you say my name. You'll be screamin' it again soon!
U-No I won't! Let me outta' this damn car!
Jarell-Naw! Not before I get a piece of that!
*He runs his hand up your right thigh and you push him away.*
U-STOP JARELL! What are you doing?! LET GO OF ME!
Jarell-SHUT UP!
*He stops the car at his beach house and he grabs you and carries you out.You were beating on his back to make him put you down but he was too strong. He carried you up to a room and left you there for a second. You realized that you had your cell and Druex's number was on speed dial. You dialed his number.*
Druex-Hello?
U-(Crying) Druex..Help..(Jarell takes the phone and throws it on the floor)
Druex-Hello? Y/N?! Hello?
*He hangs up.*
Jarell-You's a slick bitch, tryna' tell on me!
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