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Date Posted: 17:35:58 12/08/03 Mon
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's message, "Re: Story.....I" Know You Want Me" A U and Jarell Story(Reposted)" on 18:59:38 11/28/03 Fri
>>Hey everyone,
>>My name is Sasha and I am 14 years old. I love Jarell
>>Da'Monte Houston because he's so sweet. But anyways
>>....The story starts out with you in your room reading
>>a book. The name of the book is Flyy Girl by Omar
>>Tyree...If you've ever read the book, you know what
>>I'm talkin' bout.
>> Chapter One(A Rude Awakening)
>>U-(reading)
>>You hear a knock on your door.
>>U-(Thinking to yourself)D**n!Who is it?
>>Y/M-Your mother. Gurl you betta open this d**n door!
>>U-What you want?!(opening the door)
>>*Before she says anything she just slaps you and
>>throws you on your bed.You start crying.*
>>U-What did I do?
>>Y/M- You think you slick don't you?! Bringin' lil'
>>boys in my house late at night when you think I'm
>>sleep! Imma' teach yo' a** a lesson!(she hits you
>>again)
>>U-We were only talking!
>>Y/M-Yeah?! And I'm just gonna' talk to you while I'm
>>beatin' yo' a**!
>>*About 15 minutes later she stops. She then gets off
>>of you and walks out of your room, leaving you there
>>all bruised up and crying. You get up and go look in
>>the mirror.*
>>U-(looking at the scar below your left eye and
>>touching the big scratch on your cheek)I hate her! Why
>>does she always have to treat me this way? What did I
>>ever do to her?!
>>*U continue to cry yourself to sleep.*
>>**Here's the scenario of the story....You are 17 years
>>old and you go to a high school in Los
>>Angeles,California.When you were nine your mother and
>>father got a divorce so you were left with your
>>mother. She started dating other men and when she had
>>a bad day she'd take it all out on you. In
>>other words, she was abusive towards you. You are very
>>pretty and you are 5'5,caramel skinned,you have long
>>black hair with hazel eyes. You met this boy named
>>Jarell in your Chemistry class and your teacher gave
>>ya'll an assignment to do together and present to the
>>class in two weeks. That's why you invited him over
>>but he couldn't come until 11:30 that night.Every boy
>>in the school has tried to talk to you but you weren't
>>interested in many of them. You are looking for that
>>special someone. That's when you met Jarell and he
>>introduced you to his home boy Druex.You haven't met
>>the others yet,but you will later in the story.*
>>Tell me how you like it so far and I'll write more
>>soon.
>>--Sasha
>>I'm back with more ya'll! Thanks to the peeps that
>>like my story. Imma' try to write as much as possible.
>> Chapter Two(A Painful Memory)
>>*The next day* (At school)
>>*You were walking to your first block class when
>>someone called your name so you turned around.*
>>Person-Y/N!Hold up!
>>U-(turning around)Hey Jarell.
>>Jarell-Hey Y/N! Where are you....What happened to
>>you?! Who did this to you?
>>U-My mom.
>>Jarell-Why?
>>U-Because she saw you come in my house last night and
>>she thought we were messing around in my room.
>>Jarell-Did you tell her that we had to do a project?
>>U-I told her that we were talking.Then she just lost
>>her nerves.
>>Jarell-D**n! Well let me walk you to the nurse's
>>office to get that cleaned up.
>>U-Jarell you have to promise me that you won't tell
>>anyone.
>>Jarell-I promise.Now comeon.(grabbing your hand)
>>*Ya'll walk to the nurse's office and Jarell sits in a
>>chair and you sit on his lap.*
>>Nurse-Next!
>>*You and Jarell walk up to her desk.*
>>Nurse-(looking down)What's your name?
>>U-Y/N.
>>Nurse-(still looking down)What's wro....(looking
>>up)What happened?! Who did this to you?!
>>U and Jarell-Nobody!
>>Jarell-Can you just fix her up?
>>Nurse-Right this way.
>>*She takes you and Jarell in a room. She tells Jarell
>>to sit in the chair and you to stand up.
>>Nurse-Can you please remove your blouse?
>>U-What?!
>>Nurse-I have to see if you have any scars on your
>>stomach.
>>U-Okay.(looking at Jarell with tears in your eyes)
>>*You start to lift up your shirt.As you do it you
>>start crying. Jarell noticed the huge bruise on your
>>stomach. You take it completely off.*
>>Jarell-Oh my god! Y/N!
>>U-(crying)I know! It hurts!
>>Nurse-Holy S**t! Y/N you have to tell me who did this
>>to you.
>>U-No I don't! Just fix it!
>>Nurse-Okay.
>>*She puts some cream stuff on your stomach and she
>>gives you some ice for your face. You put your shirt
>>back on and you and Jarell walk out of the nurse
>>office.*
>>Jarell-Do you want me to take you home Y/N?
>>U- No.Can we go to your house?
>>Jarell-You sure?
>>U-Yeah. Come on.
>>Jarell-Okay.
>>*Ya'll go to the school parking lot and you see his
>>CL5.*
>>U-D**n! Your car is tight as h*ll!
>>Jarell-Thanks.
>> Chapter Three(Leaving School With a Boy)
>>*Ya'll get in the car and drive off. About twenty
>>minutes later ya'll make it to his house. You go in
>>and look at his big beautiful house. He leads you to
>>his bedroom.*
>>Jarell-Are you okay?
>>U-Do I look okay to you?(you started crying again)
>>Jarell-It's gonna be okay Y/N. Don't cry.
>>U-No it's not.
>>Jarell-As long as I'm here, it'll be alright.(he
>>kisses your forehead)
>>U-(looking him in his eyes)
>>*All of a sudden Jarell kisses you and you start to
>>kiss him back. As soon as you start to get into it he
>>pulls away from you.He just sits there and stares into
>>your eyes.
>>*I'm sorry I cut it short ya'll...I'm back with more.*
>>*You both feel the connection and passion that you
>>have for each other and you kiss him again.Ya'll are
>>sitting on his bed and he lays you on the bed and he
>>starts kissing your neck. You are moaning in his ear.
>>He starts to feel on your thighs, then he starts to
>>unbutton your blouse. You didn't want to stop him but
>>you knew you were still a virgin even though he didn't
>>>>so you stop him.*
>>>>U-Jarell...wait...We can't do this.
>>>>Jarell-What's wrong?
>>>>U-I've never done this before and I don't want you
>to
>>>>hurt me.
>>>>Jarell-Well...okay.I respect your decision to
>>>>wait.It's coo'. I don't wanna' rush you into
>>anything.
>>>>U-(buttoning your blouse back up) Okay. I'm glad you
>>>>understand. Is there anything else we can do?
>>>> Chapter Four
>>>>Jarell-We can play Def Jam Vendetta!
>>>>U-Iight. Dat's my game! You bout' ta' get ya' a**
>>>>beat!Jarell-Whateva! I got Luda!
>>>>U-Then I'll get DMX!
>>>>*Ya'll play the game. About two hours later ya'll
>>fall
>>>>asleep in each others arms. About and hour or so
>>after
>>>>you woke up you looked Jarell straight in his face
>>and
>>>>whispered something in his ear.*
>>>>U-(whispering) I love you Jarell.
>>>>Jarell-(pretending he's sleep) ......
>>>>*Then he jumps up really fast and scares the crap
>>>>outta' you. You scream then you smack him on the
>back
>>>>of his head.*
>>>>Jarell-(steals a kiss) I love you too Y/N.
>>>>U-(thinkin' to yourself) I think I'm ready for
>>>>this.(talkin' to Jarell) Jarell, I'm ready.
>>>>* It doesn't take Jarell too long to get you or
>>>>himself naked, You are now laying underneath his
>>>>chestnut brown frame,and he's about to penetrate
>>you.*
>>>>Jarell-You sure you wanna'do this?
>>>>U-Yeah, I love you and I don't wanna' lose it to
>>>>anyone that doesn't love me for me. And I trust you.
>>>>So go ahead.
>>>>*Jarell proceeds to enter you and as he barely goes
>>in
>>>>you start to whimper so he just holds on to your
>>waist
>>>>and pushes himself through. You scream out in pain
>>but
>>>>you couldn't even get the scream all the way out
>>>>because Jarell was kissing you to hide it.After
>about
>>>>15 minutes it starts to feel good to you so you moan
>>>>in his ear and he's lovin' the sound of your
>>voice,the
>>>>feel of your body's friction, the snug fit of your
>>>>body,and the way you are rubbin' his back as he
>>gently
>>>>goes in and out.After about 1hour and 45 minutes
>>ya'll
>>>>stop and hold each other.*
>>>>*That's it for now ya'll. Hope you like it so
>>>>far.*
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>Hey!!! I'm back with more. Thanks for the luv...*
>>>>Chapter Five
>>>>*Ya'll get up a few minutes later and go take
>>>showers.*
>>>>You look at your watch and realize that it is now
>>>>4:30pm. School ended more than 2 hours ago!
>>>>U-Oh my god! Jarell You have to take me home now! My
>>>>mom's gonna' kill me!
>>>>Jarell-What time is it?
>>>>U-4:30!
>>>>Jarell-Oh s**t! Iight let's go.
>>>>Ya'll get to your house 15 minutes later. He was
>>goin'
>>>>70 miles per hour! That crazy negro coulda' killed
>>>>somebody! lol! You kiss Jarell goodbye and walk in
>>the
>>>>house. Your mom saw ya'll and she slapped you as
>soon
>>>>as you got through the door. She went to hit you a
>>>>second time and you blocked it and slapped her back!
>>>>You were beating on your mother! Jarell saw it and
>>ran
>>>>in to stop you.He grabbed you and your mom cursed
>him
>>>>out.
>>>>Y/M-You son of a b***h! You made her this way! She
>>>>would never do anything like this....
>>>>Jarell-I didn't make her do anything to you.You were
>>>>the one that....
>>>>U-Jarell, I can handle this. I hate you!!! You don't
>>>>do s**t for me except beat on me and gimme' a place
>>to
>>>>stay! F**k you!!! I'm leavin'!
>>>>*You get your stuff and leave to live with Jarell.*
>>>>--That's it for now. More later
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>Hey!!! Back wit more....No bumps yet but I'll write
>>>>anyways.
>>>> Chapter Six
>>>>Once you get to Jarell's house he calls his boys
>>over.
>>>>Druex,De'Mario,Omari,O'ryan,Marques,Jerome and
>Kelton
>>>>all rush over to see the new gurl Jarell has living
>>>>with him. (U of course!!)
>>>>I'll type more later!
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>I'm back wit' more ya'll.
>>>>*You were in your two piece bikini swimsuit when
>they
>>>>all came over. You were on your way to the pool to
>do
>>>>a lil' swimming.*
>>>>Jerome- Where she at?! I can't wait to meet this so
>>>>called beau....(You walk back to the front of the
>>>>house where they were) D**n!
>>>>Druex-Yeah dat's her! Only she looks hella sexy in
>>>>that bathin' suit!
>>>>Omari-Imma' have to take her from you
>Rell!(laughing)
>>>>O'Ryan-What's up ma? My name's O'Ryan. And you are?
>>>>U-Y/N. Nice to meet you.
>>>>Omari-I'm Omari but you can call me O.
>>>>Jarell-He think he da s**t cause' his name means
>>>>"African King".(laughing)
>>>>Druex-You already know my name but I'll reintroduce
>>>>myself. I'm Druex but you can call me Dru.
>>>>Jerome-I'm Jerome but you can call me Rome.
>>>>Kelton-I'm Kelton,but you can call me Kelt.
>>>>De'Mario-My name's De'Mario,but you can call me Raz.
>>>>Marques-I'm Marques, but you can call me whatever
>you
>>>>want,sexy!
>>>>Jarell-Stop flirtin' wit' my baby! She don't want
>>>>ya'll!
>>>>U-(laughing)I was going swimming, ya'll wanna come?
>>>>Boys-Fa'sho!!
>>>>*Ya'll all go in the pool and all the boys were
>>trying
>>>>to feel on you.*
>>>>U-Stop Marques! Yo' freaky a**!
>>>>Marques-(grabbing your left breast) You know you
>like
>>>>it!
>>>>U-HA! HA!....How bout' NO!(You splash him with some
>>>>water and swim off.)
>>>>Omari and O'Ryan- I wanna' grab dat' a**! (they both
>>>>grab a butt cheek)
>>>>U-Stop ya'll! That ain't funny!
>>>>O'Ryan-She got a phat a**! NICE!
>>>>Jarell-See ya'll Only I am entitled to grab dat a**!
>>>>U-(swimming to him and kissing him while he's
>>>>grabbing your a**) Ha! Ha!
>>>>I'll type more later. Hope ya'll like it so far.
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>Hey ya'll.....I wanna' write more soon so please
>keep
>>>>the bumps goin'. Thanx.
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>Hey ya'll. I'm back with more.
>>>>*Ya'll get out of the pool and go inside an hour
>>>>later. You and Jarell go to the mall for a little
>>>>shopping spree. That's when you run into trouble.*
>>>>*Ya'll were walking around and that's when Jarell's
>>>>ex-girlfriend comes into the picture.*
>>>>U-I want this.(pointing at a Babyphat outfit)
>>>>Jarell-Okay baby. Lemme' get my....(a girl
>>interrupts)
>>>>Girl-Hey baby!!!
>>>>U-baby?! Who the f**k are you bi**h?!
>>>>Girl-I'm LaShaunda. Jarell's Girlfriend.Who the f**k
>>>>are you?
>>>>Jarell-LaShaunda we're over....we've been over for 9
>>>>months now.
>>>>LaShaunda-No need to front on me in front of this
>>>>bi**h! Plus I'm carrying Jarell Jr.
>>>>U-Dat ain't his baby!
>>>>Jarell- It sure as h*ll ain't! Look! LaShaunda, I
>>>>don't know what kinda' s**t you tryna' pull but
>>>>um....you needs ta' step off.
>>>>U-Yeah h* step da' f**k up off my man! And stop
>>ridin'
>>>>his nuts b***h!
>>>>LaShaunda- You done f**ked up now! I'm bouts' ta'
>>beat
>>>>yo' motha'f**kin' a*s!
>>>>U-Bring dat' s**t bi**h!(You slap her)
>>>>Jarell-(grabbing your arm) Naw! Naw! It ain't bout
>>ta'
>>>>be no whoopin' of nobody's a*s goin' on up in hurr!
>>>>LaShaunda-(reaches around Jarell and slaps you)Now
>>>>what b***h! Now what!
>>>>U-Oh f**k no! Jarell let me go! Let me go!
>>>>Jarell-.........
>>>>*What's gonna' happen? Will Jarell let you go so you
>>>>can tax dat a*s or will he take you off somewhere
>and
>>>>talk to you? Find out tomorrow.*
>>>>I posted....but it won't show....I'll redo it
>>tomorrow
>>>>*Sorry It took me sooo long to type but I'm back
>now*
>>>>Chapter Seven
>>>>Jarell-Oh S**t!!! You done f**ked up now!!!(He lets
>>>>you go)
>>>>U-Yeah B***h!!! What it is now?!
>>>>*You slapped her back and she punched you in your
>>>>chest. You pulled her by her hair and punched her in
>>>>her face 4 times before she reversed it and flipped
>>>>you over on the ground.She tried to stomp you but
>you
>>>>caught her leg and pulled her to the ground and you
>>>>stood up and stomped her. She was literally
>>unconcious
>>>>before Jarell had pulled you away from her.*
>>>>Jarell-Y/N...Dat's enough! Gurl calm yo' nerves!!!
>>>>U-Yeah B***h!!! Dat'll be the last time you try some
>>>>s**t like dat on me!!!
>>>>*Before You finished someone had grabbed your waist
>>>>and you immediately swung and hit them in the
>>>>face.When you looked at who it was you got really
>>>>scared. It was a police officer and he looked mad as
>>>>h*ll!*
>>>>U-Oh my god!! I'm so sorry Sir!
>>>>Police Officer-It's ok but you're coming with me
>>young
>>>>lady!
>>>>Jarell-Officer,Is all of this really neccessary?
>>>>Police-Sir,If you don't wanna' go I advise you to
>>move
>>>>outta' the way.
>>>>U-What did I do?
>>>>Police Officer-You are being charged with battery of
>>>>another person.
>>>>U-What?!(Crying) She hit me first!!!
>>>>Police-(grabbing your arm) Come On young Lady!!!
>>>>U-Jarell!!! Don't let him take me!!! I don't wanna
>>>>go!!(You grab his hand)
>>>>Jarell-Baby!! I'm gonna' come get you. I promise
>>>>this'll be over soon.
>>>>*The police officer grabbed you and carried you into
>>>>the police car and drove you to the station.*
>>>>*I'll be back soon....My sister gotta' use the
>>>>computer.*
>>>>*I'm back now*
>>>>While you were in the back seat of the car you
>looked
>>>>out the window. You saw a young couple kissing on a
>>>>door step and you thought of your first time with
>>>>Jarell. You started crying then you watched some bad
>>>>little kids running in the street and throwing water
>>>>balloons at people and cars. Then you glimpsed at
>>>>something that looked familiar,you saw Jarell's CL5
>>>>behind ya'll in the rear view mirror and you turned
>>>>around to look out the back window. About 10 minutes
>>>>later,you arrived at the station. You walked in and
>>>>looked around at the huge,diverse place with anger
>>and
>>>>fear in your eyes.Just seconds later Jarell walked
>in
>>>>and you broke
>>>>loose from the officer's grip to run to him. He
>>hugged
>>>>you tightly. Soon, the police officer grabbed you
>and
>>>>sat you down.
>>>>U-Officer,how long do I have to stay here?
>>>>Officer-Well,for battery charges I'd say at least 1
>>to
>>>>2 months.
>>>>U-What?! I can't stay here that long! I have to go
>>>>home!!!
>>>>Jarell-Can't you lessen the sentence?
>>>>Officer-I'm sorry sir but I can't do that.(pulling
>>you
>>>>away from Jarell)
>>>>U-NO!!!!! I don't wanna go!!
>>>>*You punched the officer in his face and about ten
>>>>more officers came in to grab you.You went crazy!
>You
>>>>were punchin and kickin' and scratchin' and bitin'
>>>>people to get to him. You got to him and ya'll
>shared
>>>>the last kiss before you were captured again. They
>>>>gave you a shot of some type of neuralizing drug and
>>>>you went to sleep. Jarell couldn't do anything to
>>help
>>>>you. The Officers carried you to a cell and waited
>>for
>>>>you to wake up.*
>>>> Chapter Eight
>>>>*When you woke up you were in a cell with a female
>>>>staring into your face.*
>>>>U-Where am I?
>>>>Girl-Hi. I'm Britney.
>>>>U-I'm Y/N.
>>>>Britney-You're pretty. So you're the girl who fought
>>>>all those police officers when you got here?
>>>>U-Yeah. I had to get to Jarell.
>>>>Britney-Who's Jarell?
>>>>U-Jarell's my boyfriend. I had no idea that love
>>could
>>>>be so strong or so painful that it could make me do
>>>>something like that. I don't know what came over me.
>>>>Britney-I do. It was love in it's purest
>>>>form,gurl,love makes us all do stupid s**t. So what
>>>>you in here for?
>>>>U-Battery.
>>>>Britney-Oh,I'm in for murdering my boyfriend.
>>>>U-D**n!
>>>>Britney-It's not so bad here,once you get used to
>it.
>>>>*Be back lata*
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>*Tell me how you like it so far and I'll type more
>>>>later*
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>---There will soon be a co-writer working on this
>>>>story....I'll post when I get outta school. Thanks
>fa
>>>>da love.
>>>>--Sasha
>>>>I'm back wit more ya'll. Sorry it took so long.
>>>>
>>>>U-Well,Don't ya'll get into alot of fights here?
>>>>Britney-Yeah,but the way you were fightin' ain't no
>>>>girl wanna' fight you.
>>>>U-(Laughing) Yeah right! There are alot of women
>here
>>>>that look like they can kick my a*s!
>>>>Britney-Like that one right there!
>>>>*She points to a built looking woman. She was 5'7
>and
>>>>was really muscular with some scars, but other than
>>>>that she was pretty. She looked at you and rolled
>her
>>>>eyes then mouth out the word B*tch! You got pissed
>>>>really quick!*
>>>>U-I know dis' b*tch didn't!!! Oh f*ck naw!(You get
>up
>>>>in a attempt to hit her but Britney pulls your arm
>>>>back)
>>>>Britney-Girl she ain't even worth it! Calm
>>down....She
>>>>jus' testin' you. She do that to all new comers.
>>>>U-Well she don't need to be f*ckin' wit' me like˙
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