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Subject: Re: Out Of The Universe

Author:
Sophie~Eloise

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Date Posted: 12:08:41 05/14/02 Tue
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Out Of The Universe" on 08:58:54 04/28/02 Sun

I really liked this. I read it to my little brother. He has a blue dinosaur - and he made me read it to him 3 times. Please write more like this.

Sophie~Eloise

>They romp there
>in the wide open
>quite a spectaclem they are
>huge dinosaurs
>
>Eating trees
>with big eyes staring
>at us
>little folks hiding
>among shrubs, small trees or
>dashing about
>like earthworms
>
>(If you want to consider
>earthworms dashers)
>
>The trees with these
>huge and splashy hairdos
>not really a challenge
>at all
>for the munch
>of dinosaur teeth
>
>Whether having a breakfast, or lunch
>they gobble away
>of course, the trees
>get a good
>hair cut
>
>But then above
>there always is more to eat
>says the dinosaur, eyeing
>the huge canopy -
>the sky
>
>eyeing
>
>deciding to jump,
>get on all fours
>and take a bite
>as the rains poured down
>wetting all
>not to leave out
>our hungry friend
>
>Chomp
>Chomp
>Chomp
>
>He eats
>
>Tearing holes
>in the sky
>
>Eating
>turning blue
>
>a new type of being:
>a blue dinosaur
>who eats
>now
>skies
>
>Chomp Chomp Chomp
>
>Just eating
>it all,
>tearing it down
>as others
>frolic near
>
>Till one
>decides
>
>To jump
>out
>
>of the Universe

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