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SparrowBell
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Date Posted: 11:47:20 07/09/02 Tue

Some parts of the story are not so coherent. Well, probably it's just strange, like .. how could Rui propose suddenly?! Then, you mean to say Doumyoji raped Makino?! I don't think he will do that esp. something like this happen before?! Then, after that, Makino left with a far-fetched reasons.

I don't think it's so easy for her to go to UK, plus, ... I haven't seen anything so admirable about her.

The story is in some sense, imaginative, but the flow is not that coherent as I have said. You should put more efforts to describe everybody's feelings.

I guess I'm very skeptical about, I will rather be poor than force to marry someone I don't love. Well, nobody likes to be forced but don't think money is something that can be given up so easily. This is a little bit childish.

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