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Date Posted: 06:31:07 11/14/00 Tue
Author: 鄧琬容,第三組
Subject: 回應秋蠅

導修組的題目是:《秋蠅》一詩所呈現的詩情,是不是只有單純的消極,還有沒有其他呢?
我想首先《秋蠅》一詩極富消極意味是不寄置疑的。因為詩中借用了秋蠅的視覺、聽覺和觸覺,去表達秋蠅的痛苦感受時,又深深地抒發了作者自己的身世滄桑之感。詩中遺詞用字,特別見到作者的心意:「窒息」、「昏眩」(第二節)、「蒼茫」、「腳軟」(第三節)、「僵木」、「沉重」(第五節)等都營造了一種陰沉的氣氛。最尾的二節,更是突出了死亡的氣氛,紅色、黃色、土灰色,錯雜的回輪,正表不了秋蠅正版拖進漩渦的深處,漸漸拖向死亡,在此作者也借此景抒發了在繁亂、冷酷的世界中,人們被擠壓、摧殘王瀕臨死亡。故可以見到詩中有非常濃厚的消極悲哀的氣氛。但是除了悲哀、消極,我想此詩也留給讀者少少希望的感覺,詩中最後用「載在巨鳥的翎翮上嗎?」我覺得就是表示出秋蠅雖漸漸步向死亡,但是一只巨鳥彷彿就是一位使者,悄悄地帶它坎出苦境,飛向另一境界。

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