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Date Posted: 06:50:20 10/15/00 Sun
Author: 陳柳茵(第一組)
Subject: 有關"綠"

這篇文章的主題同題目一樣都是說"綠",有"眼乃神光所聚"的特點.如老師所說例如全篇以綠為起首,而視點也圍繞"綠",還有"綠"的形容也有很多.我記得中文寫作的老師曾經說過形容一樣抽象的東西時,我們可以以上實的東西來表現抽象的事物,讀者才會明白.顏色有很多種,就算白也有很多種白,例如白有白雲的白,白玉的白.同樣,在"綠"中,作者用了很多筆墨來形容梅雨潭的綠.例如"我曾見過....綠楊,脫不了鵝黃的底子,似乎太淡了",對於碧草,潭綠又太濃了,"宛如一溫潤的碧玉,只清清一色",令讀者對潭綠更有所體會,也緊扣題目"綠".

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