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Subject: Re: Down Ass Chick Chapter 11(Make sure to bump my ish!)


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ChocolateDelight
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Date Posted: 15:19:40 07/23/02 Tue
In reply to: ChocolateDelight 's message, "Down Ass Chick Chapter 1" on 08:58:03 07/10/02 Wed

Title: Down Ass Chick
Author:ChocolateDelight
Rating: R

Author's Notes: Well just one more chapter and this story is over. It was a good ride while it lasted wasn't it? Well here's chapter 11.



Chapter 11
Omari walked down the jet steps and sighed. It was now 4 months after he received the call from his dawg Marques that told him where Mario and La’ Keisha were. But when he went down to St. Augustine he found out that they had left becuz they found out he was coming for them. So it took months for Omari to get another legitimate lead but he finally got it when Romeo called him yesterday and told him that Mario took La’ Keisha to a little villa in St. Sophia. So Omari was there with Fizz and Romeo who insisted that they come with him.

After Omari grabbed his duffel bag, he turned to face Romeo. “Where’s the villa again?”

“It’s by this little Latin restaurant. So when are we goin to go?”

“We’ll leave a quarter to 9. Y’all strapped right?”

Fizz nodded his head as Romeo nodded too. They then walked to the limo that was waiting for them and went to their hotel.
*~*
La’ Keisha awoke when she heard Mario talking on the phone outside her door. She slipped out the bed and wobbled to the door to listen to see what he was saying.

“So that nigga Omari know where I’m at huh? Well I ain’t gon leave this time. I’mma just stay here and await his arrival. That nigga gon learn not to mess with my family again. Call me when he’s ten minutes away so I can get ready. Aiight one.”

La’ Keisha stepped away from the door and felt tears come down her face. Ya see ever since she found out she was pregnant she been crying a whole fucking lot lately. But these tears were of sadness and joy. She knew that Omari would come save her. She knew that he wouldn’t give up looking for her no matter what lies Mario told her. After she dressed in a sweatshirt and baggy jeans, she sat down on her bed and started to write a letter to Omari. In the letter she told him how she missed him dearly and how she was happy she was having his child. She also told him that no matter what people told her she would always love him. After La’ Keisha finished writing the letter, she walked over to the window and grabbed the fingernail file. Living in captivity for nearly five months La’ Keisha taught herself how to pick the lock on the window. And she was finally done so she could escape anytime she wanted to. La’ Keisha began to pack her clothes in her suitcase when she heard the door open.

“Goin somewhere ma?”

La’ Keisha turned around to see Mario in the doorway looking at her with lustful eyes. La’ Keisha put on a fake smile and laughed. “Naw. These clothes just dirty so I decided to put them in the suitcase and get some fresh ones. When is breakfast I’m hungry.”

“Breakfast should be soon. But enough about that. Yo man comin tonight but when I eliminate him me and you can be together.”

This nigga just can’t no for an answer can he?

“In yo fuckin wet dreams nigga.”

“We’ll see bitch we’ll see,” Mario said before leaving the room.

Sighing, La’ Keisha sat on the bed and rubbed her stomach. “Hurry up O. Hurry up and save us.”
*~*
At 8:45, Omari, Fizz, and Jerome hopped in a low key Lincoln Navigator and started for the villa. Omari wiped his sweaty palms on his pants and looked out the window. He hoped for La’ Keisha’s sake that Mario ain’t try to rape her because he knew that if he did, La’ Keisha would be scarred for life.

Omari jolted out of his thoughts when he felt the car stop.” We here already?” he asked Fizz.

“Yeah. So you ready to do this dawg.”

Omari nodded. “Let’s go get my girl.”
*~*
La’ Keisha sat up when she heard a car stop she looked out the window to see Romeo’s wild hair. So that only meant that Omari was here. La’ Keisha put the chair against the door to prevent anyone from coming in and dropped her suitcase on the concrete outside. La’ Keisha grabbed the note for Omari and shimmied down a pipe down to the ground. She then grabbed her suitcase and ran to the Navigator. After she put her suitcase in the car she grabbed a couple of knives and walked back into the villa.
*~*
Omari ran to the living room and stopped in his tracks when he saw Mario standing there. “Long time no see Omari,” Mairo said with a smirk.

“Where is La’ Keisha?”

“Don’t worry about that. Let’s just say that I kept her really satisfied in bed. At first she ain’t want it but I convinced her that she would like it. But it really ain’t take that much convincing because she got down on her knees like that,” Mario said snapping his fingers.

Pissed off, Omari lunged for Mario and the two started fighting. Punches were thrown from both of the men but Omari got the best of Mario. Mario fell to the floor and Omari stood above him. “You see what happens when you mess with people I love you get fucked up.”

But little did Omari know somebody was pointing a gun at him right now.
*~*
La’ Keisha ran to the living room where she heard the fighting and gasped at what she saw. There was Kelton pointing a gun at Omari. La’ Keisha tried to open her mouth to warn Omari but no sound came out. So she just ran towards Omari and pushed him out the way and got shot in the chest.

At the sound of a gun goin off, Omari turned around to see La’ Kesiha on the floor grabbing her chest. “Keisha,” he mubled when he saw her. He ran over to her side and tried to apply pressure to her chest.

“Omari,” La’ Keisha said softly.

“Shh. Save your energy you gon be okay,” Omari assured her.

“Omari I love you.”

“I love you too girl.”

“And I’m pregnant.”

Damn that news hit Omari like a ton of bricks. “Omari promise me something,” La’ Keisha said.

“Anything.”

“Save the baby and name her Nia after my mother if she’s a girl.”

“Don’t worry you and the baby gon be okay.”

La’ Keisha shook her head. “One of us has to go and I rather the baby live because she doesn’t deserve to die.”

Omari wiped his eyes as he heard the ambulance sirens. “I love you La’ Keisha Hamilton.”

“I love you too Omari Grandberry.”

And with that La’ Keisha stopped breathing and Omari cried silently. The only girl he loved was now dead.
*~*
Y'all know what to do.

Holla!

ChocolateDelight

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