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scaryman the umm.. thinks his name is way too long
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Date Posted: 01:33:48 06/23/03 Mon
dunno why but i felt like putting one of my poems up from when i first came to VC.. i guess u can b my critic or just read it and b too baffled to reply.. heh yep well at least i know that windbreaker will respond. thats a given. here it goes, woot!
Feelings
So much happens as a year flies by
puttin depression to the side,
losing my pride
Getting pushed around and thrown to the side
Wondering how people can be so mean
to come back after its done and make a scene
I know it was true u had me whipped
My soul becomes scarred, bruised and even ripped
From the friction of my pen my frustration rubs away
The pain of my past freed and the love to stay
Hopin that my next can treat me right
Seein wat im worth, someone with insight
The way our eyes connect lead me to believin
You can see my love, pain and know that its worth keepin
The day u read the way I write about the way u make me feel
Is the day that u will know that the way i feel is real
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WOW im posting! its been a while