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Subject: Re: 唔該幫我改改可以嗎

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Tam

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Date Posted: 02:36:34 05/13/03 Tue
In reply to: ching ching 's message, "唔該幫我改改可以嗎" on 09:18:23 04/27/03 Sun

>請問可以幫我mark eng compo嗎? 我大概會有咩grade le?
>Thank you very much!
>Topic: your school has received a gift of money. your
>principal has decided to improve the school facilities
>in many ways by spending this money.
>You are the Secretary of the school and you have been
>asked to write a short proposal to the principal
>recommending at lest three of the following for the
>improvement.
>-classrooms
>-computer rooms
>-canteen
>-library
>-rest rooms
>-sport facilities
>
>
>Dear principal:
>I would like to recommend the following improvements
>in our schools by utilizing the money received
>recently.
>As for improving the efficiency of our library, we may
>use the fund to computerize the lending, borrowing and
>recording system. With this new system, more books can
>be handled by our library, which means much variety of
>books can be offered to students. Moreover, the
>various subjects of books may enhance student’s
>interested in reading.
>We all know that knowledge is not only confined in
>books. So, besides utilizing the money in library, I
>would suggest spending them on our computer room. The
>existing computer system is slow and out-dated; we may
>upgrade the system by connecting it to the Internet.
>Students could obtain the latest information by
>serving on the Internet and hence arise their
>awareness at surrounding world.
>Despite of the importance of academic performance, I
>also concern about the health of student. Just imagine
>how could students concentrate on their studies if
>they do not have energy? I recommend using the funds
>to provide various sport facilities to students, for
>example, tennis, volleyball or badminton. These
>activities not only improve the health of students,
>but also enhance the friendship between students.
>All the above are my suggestion towards the ways of
>spending the gift of money. Thank you very much for
>your kind attention, I hope you can take my proposal
>into consideration.
>
>Yours faithfully,
>Chris Wong
>School Secretary

I don't know what grade you'll get but I htik your passage may be too short!

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Re: 唔該幫我改改可以嗎	Tam	02:40:57 05/13/03 Tue