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Date Posted: 16:30:55 12/09/03 Tue
Author: andreapunkcutie69
Subject: tell me what you think of this poem i wrote.

OKay please keep in mind that I am new at this and only 14.
my poem is called "forevermore". tell me what your honest thoughts are about it. Thanx.

Locked away in a cell.
Don't want to live,
Life feels like hell.
all alone I scream and cry.
I hate myself,
I want to die.
should I leave or should I stay.
thats a choice
i'll make today.
I choose to go.
Hope they won't know.
of corse they won't.
They don't care.
they won't notice
i'm not there.
The knife is sharpened.
Time to slice.
My turn is over.
I rolled the dice.
stabbing screaming.
Blood and gore.
buried deep
Forevermore.

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