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Subject: �Redo of That Message...I found mistakes!�

Author:
�Beyonce�

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Date Posted: 17:49:13 07/29/02 Mon
In reply to: �Beyonce� 's message, "�Knock�" on 17:26:22 07/29/02 Mon

One Week After Their Fight

�Femme walks down the hallway and finds the right door. She takes in a deep breathe, then lets it out. She knew it was the right thing to do, but she was still unsure. What would he say? She knocks on the door, waiting a moment. Once he opens the door, she looked up at him, her pretty face expressionless. "Look, Paul. I'm here for a reason." She pauses. "That night..." She takes another deep breathe, then continues. "I was stupid. Now, I don't even understand what I was thinking. My life is all messed up..." Tears form in her eyes, a single tear rolling down her cheek. "And then I met you. You helped me realize what I had done wasn't right. Not only for me, but for the people who are involved. There's things about me that you don't know, wouldn't even think I'd do. I have a child, Paul. This isn't the first time this has happened to me." The tears that had been forming in her eyes now roll down her cheek, one after another. "I was stupid before. I was 16 when I met what seemed to be the guy of my dreams. We dated for only two weeks, then he took me home one night..." She tries to bite back the tears, but fails�

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Subject	Author	Date
.Whoa.	Paul	06:40:19 07/30/02 Tue
�Breathe� -- �Beyonce�, 07:23:21 07/30/02 Tue .Watches. -- Paul, 10:13:55 07/30/02 Tue �Stops� -- �Beyonce�, 16:11:35 07/30/02 Tue .Nods. -- Paul, 17:26:41 07/30/02 Tue �Turns� -- �Beyonce�, 17:32:04 07/30/02 Tue