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Cedric
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Date Posted: 01:15:53 08/26/02 Mon
Weikai, heard the new version liaoz... hehe, it sounds much better! =)
I think the theory is right... if you have special effects, make them unique... using them through the whole song only makes them sound stale...
1) Sentences 3,4,7,8 of the chorus sounds much better because of the low-key notes played on 1,2,5,6. I especially like the trailing scale at the end of the chorus. =)
2) Coming in at the bridge (bar 22) is very good. Don't know why I didn't thought of that, hehe.
3) I'm abit worried about the solo part... bar 48 was initially left out to make the later variations (bar 56) special and immediately noticiable. Putting that may be distracting for the solo. However, on its own, it sound pretty nice. If we're gonna use it, maybe bar 56 have to be re-written... we'll try it out next session to see how.
4) There are some occassional high notes (bar 78). I don't know if it'll be distracting to the melody... again, we'll see how it sounds on real instruments next sessions.
5) Currently, the song ends after the second chorus. Which I do not want to. I'm looking for inspiration to lengthen the song. However, if the song really ends after the second chorus, you may wanna add a nice trailing licks for bass instead of the same scale (bar 95) which leads to the first chorus.
Thanks alot bro, for the effort. =)
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