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Date Posted: 13:00:57 04/26/01 Thu
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: Wait
In reply to: Dreamcatcher 's message, "Wait" on 11:11:44 04/26/01 Thu

This is a good piece, which could be tidied up a little
if one is to be critical.
Aside from those minor areas i.e capitals for the "I"s and
possibly the odd question mark where required, and maybe
alternative wording, to break away from one or two of the "can I"s,
communication is good here.
You seem to be a little more expressive with this compared
with some other works of yours that I have read.

well done

Rafael

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