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Date Posted: 17:26:42 01/21/01 Sun
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: I Thought I Knew
In reply to: AngelOfire 's message, "I Thought I Knew" on 11:27:33 01/21/01 Sun

This is a very strong piece, I also noted your rhyme theme
and how you break rhyme to maintain your line.
Also you have clustered your words well when depicting
individual actions.

Not an easy piece to crit, with such content,

the feel of this piece connects with this reader

thanks, take care

Rafael

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