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Date Posted: 17:36:02 01/21/01 Sun
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: Melancholy Waters
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "Melancholy Waters" on 08:52:23 01/21/01 Sun

I enjoy this form and have worked a lot using this, especially
if I had been working with haiku, before wrting longer works.
The using of small complete packages in this way is very pleasing
to read, with each breath having its own subtle timbre.
The overall flow of the subject is good here, and gives the
reader all that is needed to grasp the feelings imparted.

Thanks for the read


Rafael

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  • Re: Melancholy Waters -- L.J., 03:06:54 01/25/01 Thu
  • Re: Melancholy Waters -- Raphaela, 14:49:10 01/27/01 Sat
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