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Date Posted: 12:11:42 09/13/04 Mon
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: dsl-80-46-133-190.access.uk.tiscali.com / 80.46.133.190
Subject: Re: In all.
In reply to: Cyber. 's message, "In all." on 18:46:53 09/12/04 Sun

Well I am speechless. I like the tale you weave, which made me ponder. Such a sad ending, why is that?

Hope to see more of your writing here. Do I know you? Your style seems familiar.

Raphaela

>In all the billions of URL's
>from here to hell
>I fell into you by pure chance.
>
>The Unicorn caught my eye
>I saw her once you see
>shivering in dew coated morning�s breath
>the mist of creation
>had left a silver burnished sheen
>to her mane
>but she spoke to me by name.
>
>An ancient tongue
>I could never speak
>explained the dawn of time to me
>and opened another dimension
>for all to see
>
>The Unicorn
>painted the sky in blazing red/gold sunsets
>in blue so deep
>the eagles fell asleep in their nests
>and left the sky to the doves for a time.
>
>I stoked her timid flank
>as she wove history for me
>with a voice
>dipped in honeyed wine.
>
>She allowed me to see
>where humanity went wrong
>the easy way
>we chose the wrong song
>to sing
>
>And spring
>is only a heartbeat away
>but the Unicorn
>has so much more to say
>
>And so I continued to listen
>through smooth skinned youth
>and the confrontation of thirties truth
>through harsh reflections of middle age
>To the unopened chapter
>with a dog-eared page
>of my death.
>
>The Unicorn
>stopped speaking
>
>And I fell silent.

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