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Date Posted: 22:33:18 07/16/02 Tue
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.245.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.245
Subject: Re: Softball
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "Re: Softball" on 12:52:23 07/13/02 Sat

I got to read this the other night, sadly
without time to comment how much I like
this putting the image of a young woman/girl
up at bat with tons of effort, only to 'fan' one!!!
Well done SandDollar!!! Very much enjoyed
the read!!! SuSanne

>I like the tightness of the lines, as well as the
>imagery - it is certainly complex and you make your
>reader work (which I like ;)
>
>Raphaela
>
>
>
>>(Tribute to my daughter)
>>
>>No hitter baby
>>Bats savory eyes
>>As her tight lips bunch
>>In a cherry knot,
>>Mass spaghetti twist
>>Splits lanky legs ‘til
>>Aggregate windmill
>>Opens pinched up grip,
>>Sassy red-hot orb
>>Ejects down the pike
>>Past crosswise plate that
>>Awaits staunch service
>>And whooooooosh!
>>Another bat fanned.
>>
>>© SandDollar; June 26, 2002

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