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Date Posted: 15:23:40 07/20/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheM05b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.15
Subject: Re: Comes Blindness
In reply to: SuSanne 's message, "Comes Blindness" on 11:33:10 07/20/02 Sat

I found this very meaningful and sincere.

I think the last stanza may benefit from a slgiht rewrite

Good work though.

Raphaela



>This is a poem I wrote this morning
>
>color=indigo>
>COMES BLINDNESS
>
>
>Lord I am accepting, yet scared
>As my vision slowly fades
>Turning off colours of life,
>Painting my world gray.
>
>Words I have delighted in
>Are now running from view
>From a magnifying glass prism
>Even though there is nothing I can sue.
>
>So my crankiness expounds
>Daily fighting the fear
>As I pray dear Lord
>You hold me near and dear.
>
>As I pray others will see
>Not to take anything for granted
>That so includes me
>Of fading sight much wanted.
>
>But sadly soon may be gone
>Regardless of throughout my life
>Have really never done others wrong
>For this life ever drawing to a close
>With visions .. of blindness strife.
>
>
>© SuSanne &*_*&

>20.7.02~smb.powell
>All rights reserved
>RainbowSam11@hotmail.com
>
>Dedicated for my friend H.K.
>
>
>color=indigo>

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