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Date Posted: 09:06:58 07/22/02 Mon
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.169.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.169
Subject: Re: As In Books
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Re: As In Books" on 21:07:57 07/21/02 Sun

*smile* Well perhaps the majority of people do not
say 'than of those' but I have the majority of my
life and I'm sorry Al, I feel the majority of people
who post here would understand it just as red being
the colour of blood when flowing outside of the body,
[inside without a cut, it flows blue-a medical fact]
and red also being the symbol colour of love around
the world, I did not think that would be above the
heads of any who post here-but then, I could be wrong?;-p
I do appreciate your comments so please do not think
by me gently disagreeing with you means I think you
are wrong, just seeing things from a different perpective
for which I say thank you my friend!!! I will rethink
'than of those' and yet, I still like it....*grin*. SP

>heyyy SuSanne
>
>I'm so glad you'rewritting these wonderful poems. It
>is a tragedy, as you do tell, that hatred exist for
>the strangest reasons, for example, place of birth,
>whatnot. You have spelled this out aptly, as far as
>you go, yet there exist certain distinct problems I
>will show -
>
>Putting me down when I do not?
>So many times these pricks have hurt
>As a rose's thorn draws blood
>That when spilt, being the ironic hue
>Of symbol colour of love.
>
>this is really hot as cool as you think, and let me
>tell why. The analygy of the rose is true, they do
>prick, and perhaps draw blood if pricked hard enough,
>yet this is an analygy you have inserted, something
>that occured to your mind, therefore to say it has
>ironic value is really not true, is it? That is that
>it is opposite to the colour of the symbol of love.
>You stretched this just a little too far, and as you
>can see a ton of people will get lost here.
>
>
>this line
>
>They are so much better than of those
>
>people do not say, "than of those", sorry here Su,
>they don't
>
>Now you have to know what I'm talking about here.
>This type of language that you have invented has a
>hickupping motion to it, as though they're are two of
>you attempting to tell the story concurrently, and you
>continuously miss beats, while the other attempts to
>catch his breath, whatever. It really looses it
>poetic quality when attempting to get too fancy.
>Language in itself is absolutely nothing, containing
>no beauty whatsoever, no matter how we state it,
>unless founded on beauty, lucidness, and clearity.
>Hugsss, Al

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Re: As In Books -- AAAAGGGSSS, 11:32:42 07/22/02 Mon