| Subject: Oh common Ant! Who Else?! |
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Bah!
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Date Posted: 07:41:05 10/08/03 Wed
Author Host/IP: NoHost/12.41.194.121
In reply to:
Anthony
's message, "Re: Dreary dorm..." on 08:51:44 10/07/03 Tue
Hey Ant,
Who has been taking liberties with Jim's poems? Who has wrote commentary, poked fun at, and all together altered the words of Jim's elaborate poetry? Well, as you referred to me before, the local crackhead.
Site looks great.
ps. I can't wait for the next poem. Jim, keep'em coming.
>Whoever wrote this, you are the MAN!, its the funniest
>thing i heard in a long time, so much is going on , i
>really feel this one, the dialect, simple yet
>astounding, the meter, flawless, the hidden subject
>matter, infinately amusing, you must expose yourself;
>the speachless poet, for i will make you, the
>one........for a day.
>
>ant
>
>>>Oh dweawy storm...
>>>so qwiet,
>>>so out of the fowum...
>>>lamp light in my eywes
>>>nuting to say,
>>>jus' long mewodic sighs.
>>>Mewencholy feelings
>>>accompanied with fworescent
>>>ceiwings...
>>>and so I cwap
>>>qwiet...
>>>nuting said...
>>>for I am alone now..da beating of ma hart iz da onwy
>>sound.
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