Subject: Re: Oh common Ant! Who Else?! |
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anthony
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Date Posted: 09:41:22 10/08/03 Wed
Author Host/IP: ool-18bbe95b.dyn.optonline.net/24.187.233.91 In reply to:
Bah!
's message, "Oh common Ant! Who Else?!" on 07:41:05 10/08/03 Wed
you sure do have a lot of free time at work huh
ant
>Hey Ant,
>
>Who has been taking liberties with Jim's poems? Who
>has wrote commentary, poked fun at, and all together
>altered the words of Jim's elaborate poetry? Well, as
>you referred to me before, the local crackhead.
>
>Site looks great.
>
>ps. I can't wait for the next poem. Jim, keep'em
>coming.
>
>
>>Whoever wrote this, you are the MAN!, its the funniest
>>thing i heard in a long time, so much is going on , i
>>really feel this one, the dialect, simple yet
>>astounding, the meter, flawless, the hidden subject
>>matter, infinately amusing, you must expose yourself;
>>the speachless poet, for i will make you, the
>>one........for a day.
>>
>>ant
>>
>>>>Oh dweawy storm...
>>>>so qwiet,
>>>>so out of the fowum...
>>>>lamp light in my eywes
>>>>nuting to say,
>>>>jus' long mewodic sighs.
>>>>Mewencholy feelings
>>>>accompanied with fworescent
>>>>ceiwings...
>>>>and so I cwap
>>>>qwiet...
>>>>nuting said...
>>>>for I am alone now..da beating of ma hart iz da onwy
>>>sound.
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