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Date Posted: 22:25:11 01/21/03 Tue
Author: 文津
Subject: Re: 天仙子(對不起,誤會了棗利雅的意思,這次會處理得較好)
In reply to: 文津 's message, "天仙子(這次變走幪面超人)" on 19:18:54 01/20/03 Mon

>曾記唱遊輕拍手
>小子身搖如醉酒
>青蔥歲月不回頭
>操場走
>凝望久
>雲似星空魔獸否
>
>春日郊遊風拂柳
>大哭思家難忍受
>遙觀古屋說幽冥
>牆壞朽
>從此後
>笑憶當年奇事有

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  • 天仙子("大哭"句不順口,結句太俗套,突然想到一個石破天驚的修改) -- 文津, 01:31:13 01/22/03 Wed
  • Re: 天仙子(修改,犯了兩個久字) -- 文津, 02:05:20 01/22/03 Wed
  • 其實整首都俗套 (NT) -- 失望, 05:48:22 01/22/03 Wed
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