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Subject: needs to be longer but otherwise great


Author:
Kaleigh (: ))
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Date Posted: 17:03:33 01/28/08 Mon
In reply to: Cara 's message, "Re: Inuyasha Fanfic" on 08:43:15 01/13/04 Tue

>TRUE LOVE SAVES THE DAY!
>
>Authers note: This story contains extrem scenes of
>violence and very descriptive scenes of blood use, and
>some minor swearing. Read at your own discression.
>
>By Cara Cunningham
>Email: angel_wings_sc@hotmail.com
>Email me what you think of this fanfic! (If you want!)
>
>
>
>
>Chapter 1- The Begining!
>
> Kagome, Inuyasha, Shippo, Sango, Miroku, and Kirara,
>wven Mioga the flea were enojoying a peaceful picnic
>by a sparkling blue lake. Sango was making the
>noodles, and Miroku was watching her, or should I say
>watching her butt. Kagome was taking a bath, little
>did she know Inuyasha was watching her take the bath.
>Kagome just noticed Inuyasha watching her. Kagome
>yelled "SIT BOY!" Inuyasha did a face plant on the
>ground. "What was that for?" Inuyasha asked angrily
>getting up."You were watching me take a bath!" Kagome
>snapped getting out of the water and wrapping a towl
>around her. "Inuyasha shame on you" Miroku responded
>his hand wandering. Miroku *grouped* Kagome."Ahhhhhh!
>Get your hand out of there!" Kagome shreiked as
>Inuyasha pushed Miroku away. "What have I told you,
>DON'T TOUCH HER!" Inuyasha yelled angrily.
> Five minutes later Kagome came out in a short red
>skirt and a loose fitting red and white top. She had
>red knee high sock on and black shoes. Inuyasha stared
>at Kagome for a couple of minutes turning a slight
>pink, turned around and layed down in a tree nearby.
>"Wonder what's wrong with him?" Kagome wondered
>curiously pulling her hair out of her face "oh well, I
>won't worry about it." Kagome than sat down next to
>Sango. "Kagome, is Miroku...always like that?" Sango
>asked blushing slightly. "Most of the time" Kaiba
>replied making sandwiches.
> Inuyasha stayed in the tree for most of the night. He
>felt something sucking on his face, something small.
>With a quick action *smack* Mioga got crushed yet
>again. "You're being extremly annoying" Inuyasha
>commented with an evil look to his face. "But Lord
>Inuyasha, your blood is so tasty" Mioga replied from
>Inuyasha's hand. "Go have someone elses blood"
>Inuyasha responded throwing Mioga into the water.
>
> Meanwhile, on a small cliff on the very edge sat
>Shessomaru, arms crossed across his chest, staring
>unblinking into the firery red sun. He sat thinking
>about how much he loathed Inuyasha. "Lord Shessomaru,
>I have a plan to destroy Lord Inuyasha" said a familar
>voice, Shessomaru's evil henchmen Jaugen. "What is the
>plan?" Shessomaru asked sounding not the least bit
>curious "it better be a succeding plan because, if it
>fails, it will be on your head that falls the
>punishment" he stated with a strong and evil fiercness
>in his voice. "Oh Yes me lord" Jaugen said in a rather
>quick and frightend voice. "You have been warned"
>Shessomaru said still staring into the suns depths.
> Kagome and Sango started to gigle about something.
>(I'm the auther and I don't even know) All the guys
>stood near the waters edge watching every move the
>girls made. "What are they talking about? Miroku asked
>curiously. "Yah, whatever it is seems to be entertaing
>them" Shippo replied with a curious look in his eye.
>"Do we really want to know" Mioga stated with a sigh
>"oh who am I kidding, I do" he concluded with a dumb
>fonded look on his face. "I don't know and I really
>don't care" Inuyasha responded climbing into a nearby
>tree.
> It was nearly sundown when Kagome and Sango stopped
>talking. They crawled into their sleeping bags and
>fell asleep. Miroku, and Shippo did the same. Inuyasha
>fell asleep in the tree he was already in. Mioga went
>exploring when he saw Shessomaru and Jaugen coming
>from the west. Mioga ran to where the group was
>sleeping. "Lord Inuyasha, Lord Inuyasha wake up!"
>Mioga yelled, but he wouldn't wake up "this will wake
>him up" Mioga said sucking the blood from his face.
>*Smack* Inuyasha woke up and Mioga was flatend yet
>again. "What do you want?" Inuyasha asked in a rather
>annoyed tone. "Lord Shessomaru is coming" Mioga stated
>"and he has got something evil planned to eliminate
>you no dought." Mioga concluded causually. "We'll I
>have Tetsusaiga" Inuyasha replied "I can kick his ass
>with it!"
> Kagome woke up with a startle to find Inuyasha
>huddled over her. "Inuyasha what is it?" Kagome asked
>tierdly. "Get up Shessomaru is coming." Inuyasha
>replied bluntly. He than went to wake up Shippo,
>Sango, Miroku, and Mioga ran away as usual when danger
>aproched. "Where's Mioga?" Sango asked curiously.
>"Probably ran away as usual" Kagome sighed.
> Kagome got up and stood beside Inuyasha, she had her
>bow and arrow set ready to go. Inuyasha withdrew
>Tetsusaiga. Miroku had his staff ready, and Sango had
>her boomerang ready. Shippo was told to hide. But no
>one was prepared for what happened next...
>
>
>
>Chapter 2- The Fatal Blow!
>
> A huge blast hit near where Inuyasha and Kagome
>stood. There was two screams of pain. In the dense
>black smoke Shessomaru was seen jumping in, Miroku and
>Sango thought it was to find and kill Inuyasha but
>they were wrong. When the smoke cleared, what they saw
>made them all breathless. Shessomaru held within his
>arms an unconious Kagome. Inuuasha was sprawled out on
>the ground unconious. "Lord Inuyasha wake up!" Mioga
>pleaded "time for drastic measures" he said sucking on
>Inuyasha's face. *Smack* as if by insticnt Inuyasha
>hit his face.
> "What the, Mioga" Inuyasha studdered, then he saw it.
>The unconious Kagome in Shessomaru's arms. Or should I
>say one of his own and a borrowed one. "Inuyasha, it
>has a been a while" Shessomaru said mockingly. "Leave
>Kagome out of this!" Inuyasha yelled with anger beyond
>anger. "Why little brother, when torturing her, brings
>out the best in you" Shessomaru stated coldly. Kagome
>just started to wake up and Shessomaru noticed this.
>"Let me go!" Kagome said angrily, scuriming around.
>Shessomaru put a halt to by placing his hand around
>her neck. He squized hard. Kagome struggled as hard as
>she could. "Inu-Inuyasha" Kagome said weakly, still
>struggling to breath.
> "You bastard!" Inuyasha screamed with rage. "Now
>really little brother, you shouldn't treat me like
>that, or else..." Shessomaru replied, he took the
>claws from his good arm and thrust it through Kagome's
>left shoulder. She let out a horrible scream as blood
>as thick as surup, and as dark as the black earth
>flowed freely from it. Inuyasha couldn't help but
>watch as Kagome slowy started to die. Something inside
>Inuyasha ticked, he felt a love so strong he attacked
>Shessomaru and hit him in the arm, not enough to cut
>it off, but enough to slice through half and cause him
>to drop Kagome.
> Inuyasha dived down and caught her. He set her down
>on the ground, her breathing ragged and harsh. "You
>can't...die" Inuyasha said tears slowy falling down
>his cheek. "I...love you" Kagome caughed. Inuyasha
>bent down, pulled her head toward his and kissed her.
>Sango and Miroku looked stunned but not too surprised.
>Inuyasha drew one last breath before he lunged at
>Shessomaru, using Tetsusaiga and saying "iron reaper
>soul stealer" he hit Shessomaru in the shoulder and
>the leg. Shessomaru cried out in pain and fell to the
>ground, blood oozing from each wound.
> "Lord Shessomaru, are you alright me lord?" Jaugen
>asked. "Get..us..out..of..here!" Shessomaru said
>weakly, but he still had enough energy to grab Jaugen
>by the neck and choke him. "Were going now me lord"
>Jaugen said and they rushed off on a blood red cloud.
>
>
>Chapter 3- THE VICTORY THAT WASN'T!
> Miroku and Sango sustained minor cuts here and there,
>Inuyasha was hit in the left shoulder with poison
>claws, but would be alright in a couple of hours.
>Kagome was still bleeding from the shoulder pretty
>bad. Lady Kiadi showed up and took care of Kagome with
>Sango's help.
> Two days later Kagome was still in bad shape.
>Inuyasha spent most of his time with her. Everyone
>noticed the change in his behavior. "Inuyasha you have
>to eat something" Sango protested. "I'm not hungry"
>would always be Inuyasha's reply. Three days later,
>Kagome woke up, weak with hunger, parched with thirst,
>and weak from her grave wound. She woke up to find
>Inuyasha with his arm around her upper chest. She
>thought this a kind gester, and sat up with great
>dificulty. Inuyasha woke up and a small but extremly
>happy smile broke onto his face. Kagome burst into
>tears and hugged Inuyasha tight. Inuyasha let her cry
>it out.
> "I was so worried" Kagome sobbed "I was afraid I
>would lose you!" "No it was me who was more worried
>about you, you almost died. I almost lost the most
>important person in my life. I love you Kagome"
>Inuyasha said before he knew what words were coming
>out. Kagome and Inuyasha both blushed a deep scarlet
>red. They seperated just as Sango walked in. "Hi guys,
>I brought you some food" Sango said handing each one a
>bowl of noodles and tea. "Thanks" Kagome replied
>eating slowly, becausee it hurt to eat.
>
>
>THE END!

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