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Date Posted: 19:35:54 04/16/03 Wed
Author: Sgt. Rock
Subject: Who posted episode 8?

I'm not sure, but isn't that the original draft?

Because there were a quite a few changes done since the one that got posted.

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[> You changed things??? That's *so* not allowed!!! -- Linda_Delurked, 20:40:46 04/16/03 Wed

Rocky, that episode was perfection and if you took out one single scene I'm gonna rip your entrails out and wear them as a hat! I mean it!

Unless it's even better than the one I read, of course :)

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[> [> Re: -- Sgt. Rock, 21:29:16 04/16/03 Wed

I didn't take anything important out I swear!!

I switched two of the horsemen scenes around as it paced better, and made Raven snap James' neck after he insulted her watcher as I thought it was more in-keeping with the character, especially after events in ep 6 (I think it was 6, the one when they went into detail about her past).

I also added in a bit where James' power is shown, and changed some of the Horsemen's dialogue around. When I started writing I hadn't comepletely decided on each of their personalities, so some things made more sense with other people saying them.

However if you don't like it as much you, my entrails will be in the post :)

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[> [> [> Oh. Well that's all right then. -- Linda_Delurked, 08:05:37 04/17/03 Thu

*waves her hand dismissively to indicate her approval* Very well. Carry on!

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[> Just have to leap in to say WOW!! (and wow and wow!!) -- BunnyPhobia, 21:04:40 04/20/03 Sun

Sgt Rock that episode was immense! The pacing, the dialogue and the links between the different plots...Superb, brilliant, bravo, encore...

Very VERY impressed...

We have got SUCH a good season folks...And it's way better than season sux...*hehhehe*

Oh, if only we were on TV!!!

~BP

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[> [> Re: -- Sgt. Rock, 00:25:15 04/21/03 Mon

Not bad for my first ever script! :)

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[> [> [> You're not kidding :) -- BunnyPhobia, 21:56:52 04/23/03 Wed

Damn you with talent! Damn you all!

~BP *who's off to go practice....again*

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