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Date Posted: 12:45:44 03/27/03 Thu
Author: Faithsguy **Hoping I'm not alone here today**
Subject: Hey Mark, and all the writers if your still around

Look at this and tell me if it works so far for ep five, I'm not into the whole **writing mode* just yet, and before I start flowing away I want to make sure the first part looks alright::
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Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Season Eight
Episode Five
�Past tense�

Giles:: Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer�.

Clip of Glory telling Dawn what the key looks like, Clip of Buffy jumping off the tower in �Grave, Clip of Buffy�s hand coming out of the grave in �Bargaining�, Clip of Xanders Father in �Hell�s Bell�s�, Clip of Spike killing the two slayers, clip of Spike and Drusilla together in �School Hard�, Clip of �The Chosen Three�, Raven fighting Buffy and Faith, and Raven announcing she will stay in Sunnydale, Shoot to clip of �Grown Up� where Xander and Buffy and Willow talk about Xander leaving, cut to robed figure from �The Chosen Three� revealing its Amy.

Camera cut to Interior Xanders apartment, Xander is on the phone.

Xander: I know I contracted you for a move, but I called like two weeks ago and said I wasn�t moving!

Xander looks out the window, a moving truck is parked outside and the movers are sitting outside of the truck.

Xander: Yes, I told you, I�m not moving!

A knock at the door is heard.

Xander: Well tell them to leave. I�m sorry, goodbye.

Xander slams up the phone and walks to the door. He opens it. Its Buffy, Willow and Dawn.

Xander: Hey guys, sup?

Buffy: You tell us.

Xander: huh?

Dawn: Well with the presence of the moving truck, and the recent job offer, we are just a little nervous here.

Willow: Xander, do we have to go into that �I love you� speech again, cause I can do it.

Xander: No guys, I�m not leaving, I thought we talked about this.

Buffy: Actually we never really clarified if you were or weren�t, so I�m glad to have that loose end tied up. So why are the moving trucks here?

Xander: I called and canceled the move two weeks ago, and now all of a sudden they don�t have record of it, and they won�t leave. Anyway, is it just you three today?

Dawn: Actually Faith was here, but umm, hey guys, where did faith go?

A man scream is heard from outside and then a loud bang.
The gang runs to the window and looks down.

Camera cut to the Faith jacking a moving guy up against the truck..

Faith: Now, what would you like me to do for you?

Mover: Nothing, I uh�I�m sorry miss.

Faith: Good boy.

Xander calls from the window.

Xander: Faith, what are you doing?

Faith: He came onto me!

Xander: Oh, carry on.

Mover: Forget this! Lets go, I�m not moving a psycho.

The movers get in the truck and it speeds off.
Camera shoot back to Interior Xanders apartment.

Buffy: see, that�s all you needed to do.

Xander: Yeah, why cant I get the hairy overweight men to hit on me.

The three girls look at Xander in shock.

Xander: just a joke. So any word on this new hottie in town?

Dawn: Hottie?

Xander: By Hottie, I mean evil hell fiendish demon.

Buffy: Nothing, I just wish we knew where she was, or what she wanted.

Camera shoot to interior caves, Raven stands talking to Amy as the other robed figures chant.

Amy: Give it to me.

Raven: Huh? Honey we just met, and I�m not for �giving it� on the first date.

Amy: No the scroll you moron.

Raven: Lets not act all �big bad� around here, lets remember, I�m the one with the power.

Amy: not for long. Look, I�m not going to try and control you, after all I�m just working for the higher power, but I need that scroll.

Raven: What for?

Amy: Don�t ask questions. I summoned you, you do my biding.

Raven: Wrong honey, you summoned me, I came. Did you see anything in the instructions about bidding?

Amy reluctantly looks down and then back up

Amy: What do you want?

Raven: Just information, let me know what you plan on using this for.

Amy: I can�t tell, It�s not allowed.

Raven: Then I think I�ll hold onto this for a while, until it is allowed.

Amy: Why can�t you just give it to me?

Raven: no, no, no. You�re not the only with secrets now are you peaches?

Amy: Please, they�ll find you, the slayer and her friends will find you.

Raven: Don�t worry; I have a little plan for them.

Amy: and that is?

Raven begins to walk away, however still talking to Amy.

Raven: Keep em busy for a while. And I have just the person to do it.

Raven continues walking away.
Camera flash to a mysterious figure almost flowing into town, it is dressed in all black robes with a black top hat on.

Camera flash to black.
Roll Credits (Nothing New)

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[> Actually I hope you like it cause ep 5 is done!!! -- Faithsguy, 15:13:48 03/27/03 Thu

who am I supposed to email it to?

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[> Get it to me.... -- anyas_butt_monkey, 16:21:01 03/27/03 Thu

Kash's computer isnt back yet...

Like what I see so far!!

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[> I like it! -- Mark, 19:17:04 03/27/03 Thu

SorryI left right after I posted that yesterday so I couldn't have given you feedback last night. I liked the little in-joke to the readers about the confusion on whether or not he was moving, it was really well written! And I like the sass you give Raven. I've read some of episode 4 but this is really making me want to take some time and read!! Good job!

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