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Wow, Britt! You can't stop, now. I've got to keep reading. (r)

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CathyR

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Date Posted: 21:42:40 03/20/01 Tue
In reply to: Britt 's message, "Stride for Stride (1/1)" on 21:20:24 03/20/01 Tue

Britt, this is great. Not only is it interesting, but your style is very fluid and readable. The "Stride for stride", "Blow for blow", "Breath for breath" paragraph beginnings are wonderful. The description and imagery that you used is very effective, and your whole technique of reality vs memory works very well. I love it. I've got to have more. I mean, I've really got to have more!!!

I'll be looking for you.
SUMCDAHWALGDO@@
"I lied. . .I know"@@
Great job!
CathyR

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Thanks!g (r)	Britt	22:13:23 03/21/01 Wed