| Subject: The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove |
Author: Schnee [ Edit | View ]
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Date Posted: 14:10:08 03/03/01 Sat
I hope you all don't mind if I repost the whole thing. I have a few people who were waiting for it to be finished before they read it. Since it is *almost* finished I figured that was close enough, lol. And posting it will push me to get the last couple chapters done, instead of nitpicking at them.
With all the talk of choosing POV on the Worshop Board, I had to chuckle...the POV of this story chose me, lol. Actually I started it in first person past, but it didn't feel right so I changed it to present. I understand the arguments against using present, but for this story I liked the immediacy (is that a word?) of it. By using two first person perspectives (one perspective per chapter), I was able to get into both Michael's and Nikita's thoughts/motivations. It became an experiment of sorts. You can decide how successful I was, lol.
This story takes place after FLYF and was initially inspired by listening to the song of the same name on Dead Can Dance's Into the Labyrinth. Never imagined it would be close to 100 pages. (yikes!)
I will be sending this to Ranma to be archived before long--despite a few flaws in the story (due to my muse switching direction on me...hehehehe) But overall I've had a lot of fun writing this...and I think you've enjoyed reading it...so that's what counts, lol.
{{{Hugs and thanks}}} go out to all of you who have been reading, giving supportive comments/critiques, and hanging on these past few months as my muse came and went, lol.
Schnee
bracing for that big snowstorm in the East
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- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Lyrics -- Schnee, 14:20:14 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part One -- Schnee, 14:22:32 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Two -- Schnee, 14:26:29 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Three -- Schnee, 14:29:52 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Four -- Schnee, 14:32:00 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Five -- Schnee, 14:34:30 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Six -- Schnee, 14:38:05 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Seven -- Schnee, 14:40:24 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Eight -- Schnee, 14:44:04 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Nine -- Schnee, 14:46:51 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Ten -- Schnee, 14:49:47 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Eleven -- Schnee, 14:56:35 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove Part Twelve -- Schnee, 15:01:02 03/03/01 Sat
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove60 (old numbering--new chapter) -- Schnee, 07:10:39 03/04/01 Sun
- The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove61 -- Schnee, 17:08:19 03/04/01 Sun
Tell your muse she's doing GREAT !!! I love this story, and thanks for reposting it ! (NT) -- Ender, 17:30:50 03/04/01 Sun
Thank you so much Schnee. This is great! (NT) -- MichelleB, 18:16:24 03/04/01 Sun
- Schnee, a pleasant surprise! (r) -- Joy, 18:19:05 03/04/01 Sun
Re: The Ubiquitous Mr. Lovegrove61 -- IK: It is wonderful, dear! Your scenes (r)..., 01:06:40 03/05/01 Mon
- Scnhee (r) -- Enjoue`, 07:10:44 03/05/01 Mon
I like the story - and the way you continue to switch back and forth between them, giving each a distinctive voice... (NT) -- Nell, 11:09:57 03/05/01 Mon
- To Schnee: Wonderful internal dialogue and wanderings (r) -- Lorelei, 19:12:06 03/05/01 Mon
Well, you already know how I feel about this story, but it's so good to be able to read it again from the beginning...(r) -- Genevieve, 19:39:17 03/05/01 Mon
- okay, I'm along for this ride. looking forward to what's next (r) -- BBoX, 16:25:53 03/06/01 Tue
Each chapter is lovely...I love the way you work with the alternating POVs....Keep up the good work. Thanks, Schnee!! (NT) -- Jaron, 20:50:18 03/06/01 Tue
I know I tried to post a comment before (r) -- Titta, 02:16:52 03/07/01 Wed
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