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Subject: Re: For all 6B boys

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Date Posted: 12:43:35 01/18/04 Sun
In reply to: B~ 's message, "For all 6B boys" on 21:46:37 01/16/04 Fri

呢個所謂o既堂主
唔該出黎解釋一o下封信有o的咩錯, 而且係要清楚咁指出錯o係邊
措辭有邊度錯, 唔該指出o係邊
大家要知o個篇唔係一篇通告, 只係一封普通o既私人信
o個堂主同oldman咩都唔知, 就出黎話人o的英文level
我都好想知道佢地o既英文有幾勁
我只係覺得佢地係o的自以為是o既人
有o的人恃住係舊生(仲要唔知係咪扮tim)就扮晒pro咁話o的英文只係F4 or F5 level, 又要好串咁話"如果大家認為一個濟記中六的英文教師應該咁樣寫編正規信件的話,咁我真是應該衷心道歉"(即係暗串我地唔識分咩叫好o既英文), 仲話咩"以印象中濟記中四至中七的英文教師之水平作準,經比較後得出來的結論'同埋'文法, preposition,style(句式)什至連接詞上"有問題。個"oldman"就話"行文或用詞怪.你們不明白,大可以給一個native English writer看"。呢o的只係唔使用腦就講得出o既廢話。如果係要批評人，唔該講得清楚o的。
我唔知呢兩個人咁做有咩用心, 但我都希望佢地出黎解釋o下。
解釋唔到o既, 就唔該出黎道歉, 然後收聲。

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Re: 我都講講

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手非長
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Date Posted: 16:14:53 01/18/04 Sun

首先,段落和論點間缺乏如In addition,Finally等的連接詞.
Dear 6B 若寫成Dear 6B students則比較恰當.
let me say an early "Happy Chinese New Year" to you all!
有點Chinese-English之外,to you all應改為 to one and all 或
to all of you較好.

Use your creativity to make the presentation more lively!

If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. Also, don't forget to spare some time working on Foundation!

其實把這兩段調轉比較恰當,因為Use your creativity to make the presentation more lively!似是結尾. 而lively是通常用來形容生物. spare some time working on Foundation!看起來也有點怪. 其實passer-by A所謂的 sounds strange 所指的是所謂的, 是普通中國學生常犯的錯誤.因為我們經常以中文角度來寫和講英文.
然而所謂的英文高底也是在於這.

我勸大家還是不要再要求我們列明錯處,試問一個老師的文章比人咁樣批發.她的感受又是如果,對他的教學信心又有何影響?可謂這樣"平返"可謂無人得益.

我睇師兄們也是一番好意,而且出來工作的確是沒有差不多,casual D得唔得的歌仔唱.即使對方學歷比你底,但你亦絕不能奢望以:
你Alevel英文咩grade呀,我地公司自己信件關鬼你事來回應.
除非你是大老闆,對方是小客戶.哈哈

如有不足,請見諒

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Author: 手非長 [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:53:46 01/18/04 Sun Illustrations一句其實可以引申成另一問題~~~Redundancy.唔講唔知,會考高考不少人也死在這裡.重複意思對於一些英文根基好的人來說是蠻反感. 此外,師弟們千萬別要求人家提出其他老師之文章作比較,指名道姓拖其他人落水仍人事上的大忌. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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手非長
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Date Posted: 10:39:12 01/19/04 Mon

由於分行問題,

其實passer-by A所謂的 sounds strange 所指的是所謂的, 是普通中國學生常犯的錯誤.

應改成

其實passer-by A所謂的 sounds strange 所指的是所謂的Chinese-English, 是普通中國學生常犯的錯誤.

可謂這樣"平返"可謂無人得益.

應改成

如此的"平反"可謂無人得益.

對不起

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