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Date Posted: 13:08:44 11/22/03 Sat
Author: Nae
Subject: Mebbe.
In reply to: Phoenix 's message, "Ah, you're so calm and sedated today." on 13:03:51 11/22/03 Sat

Snippet from chapter three. In the middle of a food fight. They are hiding behind a table. Too slashy?

Zacharias, who had taken his bowl of peas with him, carefully loaded his spoon, then poked his head up long enough to take aim and fire. There was a howl of rage, and he ducked as a cup of chocolate pudding flew past.

"Augh," Lasa moaned. "Why are you joining in?"

"Because," Zacharias replied, "there is a noticeable lack of alcohol here. I'm livening up the party."

While he continued to fire spoonfuls of peas with alarming accuracy, Lasa said, "This isn't a party. It's a temple. Have some respect!"

"Hard to respect a God who's forced on you," he said.

Joseph stared at Zacharias as if he had found his soulmate. "I think I love you," he said.

"Oh, come on," Lasa snapped. "You love all atheists preemptively. Just wait till you get to know him."

Zacharias flashed her a smile. "He cannot resist my manly charms," the blond told Lasa. "You can't, either. I am devastatingly attractive."

"I didn't mean it like that," Joseph said frantically.

Lasa shrieked as a baked potato landed near her ankle. "I can't believe we're having this conversation!"

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Replies:

"I am devastatingly attractive." -- Phoenix, 13:14:59 11/22/03 Sat
- Still... -- Nae, 13:17:50 11/22/03 Sat
  - That could change... -- Phoenix, 13:19:52 11/22/03 Sat
    - You duck. -- Nae, 13:24:57 11/22/03 Sat
      - You blue-footed booby. -- Phoenix, 13:28:40 11/22/03 Sat
        *sigh* -- Nae, 13:34:33 11/22/03 Sat