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Date Posted: 04:32:35 03/14/01 Wed
Author: tori
Subject: Re: A Cold Wind
In reply to: WindWalker 's message, "A Cold Wind" on 00:25:33 03/14/01 Wed

Jan, this was a beautiful piece
and you did very well with the style~
Loosing a love one does make
you more Vulnerable,
Your words described this
In having the brother and
And him seeing in her eyes
Where she belonged
And it took you to the truth of family
I think in most cases
we do admire our siblings choices
We look at what they have
And seek to find that slice of the pie
Making it so understanding how
The brother could long for her
Very nice work~

Tori~

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