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Date Posted: 08:38:54 05/25/01 Fri
Author: luke
Subject: ... and the "paper heart." I love the rhythm and rhyme, where did you get the idea for the form?
In reply to: luke 's message, "I agree with Zeina. Having the tiger in the first 2 stanzas but not the last makes it sound incomplete, weaker end, waiting for the return of the tiger. Ending with the strange sex thing seems a bit odd. I like "of always" as opposed to "always of" and th" on 08:37:02 05/25/01 Fri


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[> [> [> I have no idea about the form? maybe some simple poems I read a while ago and found really enjoyable... I think you are right, both of you, about the need for at least one more stanza. P.S. best poem I have ever read "The horses" by Ted Hughes... check it out if you can. -- tim, 14:26:51 05/25/01 Fri

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