VoyForums
[ Show ]
Support VoyForums
[ Shrink ]
VoyForums Announcement: Programming and providing support for this service has been a labor of love since 1997. We are one of the few services online who values our users' privacy, and have never sold your information. We have even fought hard to defend your privacy in legal cases; however, we've done it with almost no financial support -- paying out of pocket to continue providing the service. Due to the issues imposed on us by advertisers, we also stopped hosting most ads on the forums many years ago. We hope you appreciate our efforts.

Show your support by donating any amount. (Note: We are still technically a for-profit company, so your contribution is not tax-deductible.) PayPal Acct: Feedback:

Donate to VoyForums (PayPal):

Login ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time ]


[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

Date Posted: 11:54:27 04/07/01 Sat
Author: zeina
Subject: the first paragraph reminded me a little of the poetry we are looking at in class (Edward Thomas) for some reason. i think its the way it all flows nicely and is all smooth and calm and sort of conversational. but yes the fact that people are watching at the end kind of unsettles it all.
In reply to: faye 's message, "Llafranc" on 12:25:17 03/23/01 Fri


[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]


Replies:

[> I'm not sure what I think of this, it is as if something is missing that should link it alltogether. I do like the oversized heads as that is what bouys are now that you mention it, but the 'watching' leaves it too open. Don't get me wrong I think it is a very good peice perhaps somevmore characterisation of the person it is about would help. -- maggie, 20:01:00 04/19/01 Thu

[ Post a Reply to This Message ]
[ Edit | View ]



Post a message:
This forum requires an account to post.
[ Create Account ]
[ Login ]

Forum timezone: GMT+0
VF Version: 3.00b, ConfDB:
Before posting please read our privacy policy.
VoyForums(tm) is a Free Service from Voyager Info-Systems.
Copyright © 1998-2019 Voyager Info-Systems. All Rights Reserved.