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Date Posted: 11:15:37 10/14/04 Thu
Author: diesel
Author Host/IP: 4.10.28.57
Subject: shut up you wretched fool
In reply to: an English Major's Worse Nightmare 's message, "typo's corrected I hope" on 06:53:54 10/14/04 Thu

>the adrenalin shakes when I write, I know that is a
>good thing as spontaneous prose but so many typo's, I
>suppppppppppose I should proofread but then I start to
>edit, my vanity creeps in, so , but my fingers shake
>so much it is hard to hit the right keys hard to lie
>to one's own glands, but I apologize for my vanity by
>not editing, it make for a hard road for readers, how
>some one so young can see so much despair and
>desolation, I suppose she is an authentic beat, I hope
>your criticism is helpful to her, I only wish I could
>make her laugh,
> speaking of laughs Doreen could use a few now and
>then, if I was her i would be watching lots of laurel
>and hardy, "why did you join the French foreign
>legion, "we came her to forget" Forget what, "well we
>forgot so can we go home now.
>
>>I( have read some her posts on the stories to
>>sometimes feel nauseous from her substance, she is
>>very smart, I wish her well, but I still can't
>>understand how someone can walk by a cat swimming in
>>one those canals in Venice, and =- I would have
>>probably jumped in after it, but then again i am
>>certified ''''
>>>I read her stuff on the pre-October Earth, pre-police
>>>state LitKicks. Some of it was good, though her
>>>"poetry" was the typical "I'll be real oblique and
>>>people will think I am profound" school, seen in cafe
>>>and academic writing everywhere. She think's that she
>>>is a much better than she is.

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