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Date Posted: Wed July 21, 2010 20:56:39
Author: JohnD
Subject: Disposal Of Flesh question

Hi there, I just read Mad Bombers parts 2 & 3 to Disposal Of Flesh and you did a great job.

Wasn't there a Disposal Of Flesh ending #1 posted to the old Bloodbank site. I copied it but didn't copy the author and was wondering if anyone remembers who wrote it.

Here is how it started out...

Renquist opened up the trunk to toss his gloves in and I did the same. Then he walked back to the driver's side of the car and climbed in. I have to admit, I was a little slow in getting back into that vehicle. My eyes lifted slightly, looking back at the area where a human body had been laying only moments before. The pieces now sitting in the back seat of our car, the blood vaporized almost completely from the crime scene. My mind felt as though it was swimming in quicksand, a thick murky tar that kept any of my horrific thoughts from really being solid enough for me to consider them sensible. Because if I had, even for a moment, I would have panicked for sure. I doubt that I blinked more than twice during the whole ordeal. I had just dismembered a corpse. A corpse. While the blood was still warm and running. And the worst part was...I was getting ready to get back into a car with the man who helped me do it.

I just wanted to properly credit it in my own library.

Thanks for any help.

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Ooh...thanks dude! ::Smax self:: -- Comicality, Thu July 22, 2010 20:03:27
- I thought so... -- JohnD, Fri July 23, 2010 17:24:00
  - Hehehe, don't sweat it, dude! :P -- Comicality, Mon July 26, 2010 06:10:04
    - OMG! -- JohnD, Tue July 27, 2010 22:23:18
      - Hehehe, and don't forget the possible 'cast'.... -- Comicality, Wed July 28, 2010 03:32:45
        Ummm, Comsie? Uh... you're still missing Taryn in that list... isn't he kinda important? (NT) -- TurtleBoy, Wed July 28, 2010 23:20:41
        I don't know...I haven't found anybody 'cool' enough yet for Taryn yet... -- Comicality, Sat July 31, 2010 02:02:05
        Well... uh... maybe make a top ten Taryn list and get back to me... Please?! -- TurtleBoy, Sun August 08, 2010 02:02:09
        Hmmm, not a bad idea. Maybe a top five? But all my fave 'Taryn' picks are too old for hte part now. I'll see what I can do... -- Comicality, Mon August 09, 2010 02:29:21
        Simple! Kinda... -- TurtleBoy, Mon August 09, 2010 03:43:22
        Gotchya! I'll try it tomorrow! :) -- Comicality, Tue August 10, 2010 00:05:48
        *looks at date on time stamp* Uh... *taps foot on ground and places hands on hips* -- TurtleBoy, Thu August 12, 2010 01:30:19
        Hehehe, nah, the first part was easy.... -- Comicality, Thu August 12, 2010 06:49:00
        :O What about Erick?! -- TurtleBoy, Thu August 12, 2010 11:06:03
        :O -- Comicality, Thu August 12, 2010 17:31:34
        Well... uh... so! -- TurtleBoy, Thu August 12, 2010 21:09:43
        How long do you guess gonna keep this going? -- kio, Thu August 12, 2010 21:12:44
        Ummmm... Well, I hadn't thought of that - I wonder what happens when all the replies hit the end and the forum runs out of room -- TurtleBoy, Thu August 12, 2010 22:48:59
        NUUU UHH!!! -- Erick, Thu August 12, 2010 23:09:35
        Who said anything about nudies? ... -- TurtleBoy, Fri August 13, 2010 17:58:14
        Yeah erick you perv -- kio, Sat August 14, 2010 05:01:12
        >:o -- Erick, Sat August 14, 2010 21:07:32
        :o -- kio, Sat August 14, 2010 23:29:03
        ::Smax Hand:: No touching Erick's.....wait....WHAT???? (NT) -- Comicality, Sat August 14, 2010 23:33:34
        ! -- kio, Sat August 14, 2010 23:57:42
        =0 -- TurtleBoy, Sun August 15, 2010 01:00:26
        Hahahahahaha!! -- Erick, Sun August 15, 2010 01:10:36
        Wait there was a topic -- kio, Sun August 15, 2010 04:45:59
        Nuh uh!!! -- TurtleBoy, Sun August 15, 2010 11:09:45
        I think... -- Comicality, Sun August 15, 2010 11:20:11
        !!! -- TurtleBoy, Sun August 15, 2010 14:21:06
        NUUUUUUAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -- Erick, Sun August 15, 2010 16:15:09
        *stops tickling erick* -- kio, Sun August 15, 2010 17:01:23
THANK YOU!!! -- Mad Bomber, Fri July 30, 2010 10:17:23