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Date Posted: 17:14:23 06/19/07 Tue
Author: Houssam Zahreddine peer editing to Stela Spinola
Subject: Re: Task four
In reply to: Stela Spinola 's message, "Task four" on 12:25:34 06/19/07 Tue

I thought the text was a bit confusing as to its purpose. It starts out as an exposition text, presenting information, and the argumentation only begins after this contextualization, and so it is not very clear where the thesis statement of this argumentative text is. I also found many spelling, and grammatical mistakes which hindered comprehension, so the text definitely requires proofreading. Aside from this, it is a good topic, and quite fruitfull, however, it must be better developed to achieve the purpose of an argumentative essay.

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