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Date Posted: 12:36:11 04/16/07 Mon
Author: Martinelly Martins (Corrections)
Subject: Peer Editing to Marcelo Fiúza

>Marcelo Antônio Fiúza Coelho
>Adriana Tenuto
>Produção de textos
>10 April 2007
>Is The Turn of the Screw a Horror story?
> The Henry James' short story, The Turn of
>the screw, is one of the best psychological terror
>stories(R). The plot is about a governess who tells (V)her
>experience with two children that a couple of spirits
>intend to corrupt. The suspense is created, when
>Henry James arises along (Bw/e) the narrative, the doubt (V)if
>the governess is a hopeless neurotic (V) who hallucinates
>the figures of Peter Quint and Miss Jessel, or she is
>a young woman in distress battling to save the
>children from the evil. Independently of this(Q) both
>point of view, The Turn of the Screw has lots of
>elements of the (X) Gothic Novel, such as(P) “An atmosphere
>of mystery and suspense’’, “ Omens, portents,
>visions”, “Supernatural or otherwise inexplicable
>events” (Robert Harris, August 6, 1998)(R). These three
>characteristics is directly linked with two ghosts
>that governess use (Wvf) to see. Still based on Robert
>Harris “ High, even overwrought emotion”, mark (Wvf) the
>relationship among the characters, mainly when it is
>related with ((Ww/e) the governess and the children that she
>takes care.
> Is The Turn of the Screw can be
>considered as a Gothic Novel or only a story of a
>woman who is sexually repressed? The story cannot be
>restricted in the boundaries of the second
>question. (C) During the plot, several elements of
>Horror Fiction based in (Ww/e) Punter’s, Carroll’s and
>Stableford’s theories can be detected.
> For David Punter, gothic story needs to
>have three characteristics:Paranoia, Barbarism and
>Taboo. In Henry James story, the feeling of
>persecution is directly related with the children; the
>governess is worried that (Bw/e) the ghosts intend to corrupt
>the children’s mind. The taboo is related (Bw/e) when the
>governess falling in love to (Wvf) her employer. This kind
>of relationship, between different economic classes (R),
>was condemned by Victorian society. In addition (V), when
>the head master refuses to mention in the letter what
>Miles did to be expelled from school(??), the reader can
>imagine that his infraction might involve knowledge of
>heterosexual acts, masturbation or homosexually, this
>acts are also considered (V) a taboo in that era. Moreover (P)
>the possibility of Miss Jessel have committed suicide
>was also forbidden. The uncle represents the
>aristocracy; He is a young and rich man who uses his
>power over the governess - and other women - to get
>them to agree to his demands(R). He refuses to allow the
>governess to contact him. In that sense, he is
>indirectly responsible for the evil that rounds the
>kids.
> The main element to define if a story is
>gothic or not, in Carroll’s theory, is the presence of
>a monster as a threat. In “The turn of the Screw’’,
>the monsters are the ghosts, which intend to corrupt
>the children purity. They are impure because they wish
>the children ill or death as happened with Miles.
> Considering Stableford , the plot has an
>element to be accepting (Sp) as a gothic story. The
>presence of the (X) evil trough (Sp) the influence of the
>phantoms. The origin of the evil is the revenge. The
>Ghosts of Peter Quint (a predatory man) and Miss
>Jessel, want to avenge (Sp) the society that did not accept
>their possible relationship when they were alive. They
>want to turn the children impure as they were in the
>past, in order to shake the status quo.
> (//) The Turn of the Screw, contains many
>elements to characterize a Horror story, mainly the
>conflict between the evil and good. The ghosts
>represent evil forces that always try to conquer the
>children soul(Q). The governess (the woman in distress),
>represents the good (P) which cannot save the children
>(//)-Flora arrived her house because she is sick, and
>Miles dead when see Peter Quint- He died without
>confess his sins. The Governess failed as a savior.
>
> Works
>Cited
>James, Henry. The Turn of the Screw. New York :
>Oxford University Press, 2004
>Punter, David. The Literature of Terror. London:
>Longman, 1980
>Carroll, Noël. The Philosophy of Horror, or Paradoxes
>of the Heart. New York: Routledge, 1990

COMMENTS:

Dear Marcelo, I think you should have paid attention in Adriana's tips more carefully before writing your paper. Because it lacks some elements of a very well-written paper. First of all, your thesis stament is not clear, what have you intended to talk about? Is your approach about the novel "The turn of the screw" as a horror one? (like the title suggests) Or about all those gothic elements presented for those three theorists? Or still, about a sexually repressed woman? Secondly, it is not coehsive, there´s no transitional signals between the paragraphs; and finally, we cannot realize the conclusion as a real conclusion. I think You were lost among so many ideas about this novel, although the theme can be interesting.

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